beta
finally, finished it! aaaah the story is good! tho the only criticism i have is how the reward feels a bit lacking with all the build up anf angst before it. i wished there was more meat to their reconciliation. the scenes after the car crash, the one their drying the hair off shouldve been shown more profoundly since thats the culmination of their tug-of-war dynamic. Nevertheless, it was a very entertaining. Congratulations to authornim!