The only problem I have is old JP BL and their habits of making this type of MC stupid and selfish. I swear, MC was like, "oh, they're matured already" then proceed to make decisions on his own for the MLs future and whatnot like, they repeatedly demonstrated their own twstd desires on you but you went and go, they need to make decisions deadass gurl gurl which innocent and immature soul would keep testing your feelings???? You think something but do something else gurl
Idk man. Not satisfied with how easily the ml got away. I mean, I want him to realise his fault of deducting everything on his own then proceeded to torture MC like he's the only at fault. I want him to realise everything MC had thought of these years and be in despair for more than 3 chapters. Like, bro, if I'm that witch, I'll say "Sadly, you can only make another wish 100 years later" or sum just to spite him.
I swear, this author made such good storiessss ughh like I've lost count of rereading this one yk. Now I'm still excited to the point of commenting. While reading, I never got bored bcs it keeps me asking like what will happen, curse this people, dang the plot twists, omg that's twisted etc. It's complicated but that what makes it good! Story with detailed twists can never go wrong!!! the others works of this artist also didn't disappoint me! Tho it's shorter making them less detailed I'm crying qAq safe to say I'll gobble up this artist's works like ancient man seeing a woman's ankle for the first time











I really like this story, in fact, I really like this artist. They really brought some colours in my life. But I don't understand why, not just for this artist btw, but to a lot of stories where suddenly, the supposed clever/sly etc. character had a suddenly dumbed down moments??? Like, this one was glaring for the ML bcs, he, a snake, and a manipulative and sly man, of all things, should recognise when people are lying or doing bad things in general. He's mulling over it, even after seeing the annoying smirks of those two characters and all. Even if he didn't, I still don't understand why instead of questioning why MC was so worked out, he went straight to find ways to comfort him? Isn't the normal reaction to having someone you love so angered to inquire first why? Like, bro, you are not this dumb beforehand this I swear! Then, like it's my imagination, ML spectacularly resume his persona back.
Ok this is me half complaining bcs I met a lot of stories with these dumbed down characters lately it's getting me. But guys, this story is seriously adorable and dun worry, ML still punished those people who framed MC.
Oof sorry, I accidentally commented on the wrong story can it be deleted tho?