The only thing that comforts me is that they both look miserable (just look at the bags under their eyes) in the raws. That’s it. It’s gonna work
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The only thing that comforts me is that they both look miserable (just look at the bags under their eyes) in the raws. That’s it. It’s gonna work
I simply love when I’m reading a story with a clear beginning, middle, and end, and I can pick up on the little details the author built into the main characters. In this case, what caught my attention the most was the seme’s behavior. I really enjoy feeling when the seme is genuinely captivated by the uke, and this seme is definitely one of those. He’s a very raw character. The fact that he always kisses the uke with his eyes open, how he does dirty talk (i love that), that he only has eyes for him… of course, the circumstances (they’re stuck in a horror game and need to survive) help with that, but it’s still very satisfying.
My only concern while reading was understanding the game and appreciating the relationship between the main couple. And watching the uke fall in love too was really enjoyable. I’m glad the seme started to remember the moment he became interested in the uke (the version of the seme who just wanted to use him is valid, but he’s gone now, so we won).
I highly recommend this story—it’s a solid 10/10 for me.
Even though the ending was left open, I’m sure the author will deliver some really satisfying side stories—especially with the second couple.