I simply love when I’m reading a story with a clear beginning, middle, and end, and I can pick up on the little details the author built into the main characters. In this case, what caught my attention the most was the seme’s behavior. I really enjoy feeling when the seme is genuinely captivated by the uke, and this seme is definitely one of those. He’s a very raw character. The fact that he always kisses the uke with his eyes open, how he does dirty talk (i love that), that he only has eyes for him… of course, the circumstances (they’re stuck in a horror game and need to survive) help with that, but it’s still very satisfying.
My only concern while reading was understanding the game and appreciating the relationship between the main couple. And watching the uke fall in love too was really enjoyable. I’m glad the seme started to remember the moment he became interested in the uke (the version of the seme who just wanted to use him is valid, but he’s gone now, so we won).
I highly recommend this story—it’s a solid 10/10 for me.
Even though the ending was left open, I’m sure the author will deliver some really satisfying side stories—especially with the second couple.
The only thing that comforts me is that they both look miserable (just look at the bags under their eyes) in the raws. That’s it. It’s gonna work
1.The sister was in love. Love turns people blind and yes, she definitely was thinking he could “change him”. (She still homofobic tho, i get the hate for that)
2. The uke is nuts. He saw his “lover” was really close to his sister and was backing down because of it and didn’t like that so he plans this sick environment where the plan is making the sister hate her brother so that he could have all of the seme just to himself.
3. The fact the uke assault seme while married to the sister In my view, they really only had sex after the divorce, while before, when the uke and the sister was married, was only assault (“oh, but i think the seme didn’t mind it at all” still bro, look the painel where he was sleeping)
4. It’s not common seeing uke who are nuts, not the seme, so, in some way, it’s new
ABOUT THE MAIN STORY
i love when the role that usually the seme plays is giving to the uke, and the other way around too! love the dynamic! we need more uke who are nasty! and do what they wanna do! and seme who only do what the uke wants! lets go?
ABOUT THE SIDES (OMEGAVERSE)
i was shocked when i saw this coming but damn, 8 years is a really long time but the fact the seme was still a sucker for love got me.
i checked the raws and because we have sides who actually TALK WITH EACH OTHER, everything is gonna be fine because THEY. TALK!!! ah, how amazing be born and have the privilege to read this masterpiece
was kinda excited for the extras but the sex (brutal rape) was really a turn off cause just think with me: ok, he is gangster, kill people, bla bla bla, but they already told their feelings for each other, the author could had placed this sex punishment in so many others ways without the rape so yes, it was hard to read and gonna try delete from my brain those extras, they can burn in hell <3
you bitcher better give this five fucking stars because it was AWESOME:
1. Good and interesting plot
2. Good and puppy seme
3. Good and amazing uke
4. NO RAPE!!!!!!!!!
5. They have a future together, ITS NOT JUST SEX, IT ACTUALLY HAVE A STORYLINEEE
gosh, yaoi logic never fails me to have a good damn laugh
when i say i’m OBSESSED with the seme!! is such a long time since a seme heal my eyes and soul!!
the author knows that the public who reads it really wants to see the second couple so they are kinda dragging us around and it’s pretty annoying cause it always leaving us in the edge, i mean, in the start was fun and laughs but now it’s just annoying, just show us them having the fucking sex