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Ew.
I'm never one to hate on another person's work but to bring back a story that ended well FOUR years ago only to kill it DEAD, is appalling.
It's nothing like the OG story atp. Everyone's acting out of character. This is a nightmare.
I don't want to read this anymore but I also want to know how far the author's going to take it :/
Those of you who feel for Vaye should better hope you don't meet someone like him irl.
The man murdered her entire family ffs and locked her up in a monastery. Thatis not love.
Whyyyy the fuck would any sane person want him? You cannot fix him. If he was fixable the author would've done that. Vaye is a pathetic character. That is his purpose.
One could argue those were the crimes of Vaye in his previous life and he's trying to redeem himself... How exactly is he trying to redeem himself? By keeping his guilt to himself and keeping Lorena in the dark? By assuming what's best for her without asking her input? By not apologizing to her or even thinking of it? He could cry and grovel at her feet for years + hand over his entire fortune and then some and it still wouldn't be enough. This man broke her in every possible way just because he was so obsessed with her he wanted her alllll to himself.
Remember, the perp can apologize and repent but it's upto the victim whether they want to accept it or not. Forgiveness is not owed.
I agree with u. At some point, I was like "oh he's handsome and dominating" BECAUSE ITS JUST A STORY. Visual wise, he looks good yes but that should not be the reason to like him huhu
Exactly.
And there's plenty of goodlooking fictional characters who are like trash wrapped in glittery paper.