i mean love the growth but black haired mc was continuously selfish, kinda cowardly, and insensitive towards the brown haired mc. he knew he loved him, and then went to sleep with the blondie, he again was confessed to by brown haired mc and he ignored him. when they were dating, black haired mc never tried consulting in his partner, always distrusted him, never tried to talk and/or tell him his feelings. i mean again, he did grow in terms of this but it took WAY TOO MUCH for him to change
Not yall getting angry in the comments- with the obivous psychological shit that is meant to be apart of the story, they story itself was good, not great or amazing but good. And the smut was pretty awesome and in terms of executing solid emotions throughout the story the smut was awesome because it showed erens emotions of domination and levis emotions of fear and almost vulnerability.... I mean honestly people, this story, and not other stories either, are not meant to be idealistic... And dont come at me in the replies about how im advocating for rape pls, Im not ヾ(☆▽☆)
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