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Only on chapter 2 and am already about to dropthis because all the characters look like the same person what do people even pay editors for…
the art will improve so much
The uncle and twins looking the same is pretty fair though haha Also, this is a really good read but note that it has a bit of a slow start, power through and it’ll be so worth it!
I decided to reread this, and I’m starting chapter 3 but like… Not you complaining that the characters look the same from just 2 chapters and the only people they’ve introduced are twin brothers and their uncle / sperm donor
Super happy to hear this, thank you!
I read from chapter zero so there’s a lot more characters than just the three of them.
It does seem like it’ll be good which is why I hate for characters to all look the same especially in a school or military uniform situation.
I’m only seeing two other characters in chapter zero aside from the initial three, but looking closely I can see what you mean. If I focus solely on their faces, especially the eyes, there isn’t a lot of extreme variation. I do think it gets better further into the story, but I could just be thinking that because their personalities are all so different that I don’t notice lol
That’s good to know about their personalities that does help a lot with differentiation for me too.
At chapter 7 and am wondering why people who are, at best, uncle and nephew, at worst son and father are continually making sexual innuendo towards each other!? what the actual fuck could be the REASONNN