6 chapters in and what?! this is actually good. It's doing something interesting stuff with the plot and I like the way it's written so far. I mean I knew it would be good because it's Yeaze the same who wrote release your persona so I should've been expecting it ngl!
yikes (endearing) I don't really know how to express anything about this story. I don't know if it was good or bad or if I am too shocked to process it. It feels like how I felt after watching connor storrie's short film, Jerry the Ginger Eater, pure utter shock and speechless. Brain rewired. I will say JTGE is written better and has some underlying social commentary that I am not smart enough to detail but I felt the same way after finishing both pieces. In hindsight the shock after JTGE was alot deeper like an all consuming blankness.
Trauma dump over thank you
Don't be sorry glad you found it funny XDD
I still really liked the story it just went in an unexpected direction and kept doing crazy twists (atleast to me). I would've liked it more if it went in the direction I initially anticipated which was admittedly was alot more vanilla. Out of curiosity what are you thoughts?
Reminder if you don't like the direction this is going, drop it, turn off the notif. Don't like don't read that's what I'll be doing.
Don't yuck peoples yum.
Live and let live.
I am pointing out that people can choose peace of mind over constant frustration because I think people forget that's an option.
I decided that writing an angry long winded response half asleep at unholy hours of the night defeats the purpose of my original comment. So I'll leave you with this lyric just because I like it but also I think we should all appreciate that this story exists and that it brought us happiness at one point in time or other.
"So I sayyy, thank you for the music, the songs I'm singing. Thanks for all the joy they're bringing.
Who can live without it? I ask in all honesty
Without a song or dance who are we?
So I say, thank you for the music, for giving it to me."
-ABBA
Dude after reading this one time and rereading it you really think people can’t read the 5th season and be upset for how it’s going?
I like drama and stuff but I’m gonna bitch bout how fucking much of a pushover he is since he’s been one since season one - and yes I’m still gonna read and hate every second they spend apart.
No, I don't understand why you think I said that. I'm saying if a story, any story, stops bringing you joy (makes you upset) and is too frustrating you can stop reading it. I used to be guilty of this too btw which is the reason for my comment.
People continue to read when they don't like it and "bitch about it" when they could use their limited time to read something they enjoy instead and leaving the rest of the people who do enjoy reading it a more positive comment section.
That's essentially the concept of don't like don't read to me. It's not hateful or telling people to go away and not express their feelings. It's a reminder that you should read things that bring you joy/fulfilment and in doing so everyone benefits.
Your saying you'll continue to read while hating every second they spend apart is also slightly different it implies you are looking forward to them getting back together defeating evil old dude etc. I don't. Even if they made up I don't see the appeal and this drama is not why I read this years ago. I was willing to give it a shot but found it's not for me.
Instead of continuing to read it, hate it and make negative comments I am taking a step back. Letting those who still like the series enjoy it and also keeping my peace.
The reason I commented again is that I saw so many people being negative sounding like they hate it and saying it never should have got a S5. I thought a reminder that reading S5 is optional would be good even though I agree with them for the most part.
You know what, I am writing a fanfic.
where su-ah isn't an asshole and is actually the yearning greenflag top I wanted him to be but never was. I would either erase the scenting totally or make it a once off mistake or something he did subconsciously when they were younger and whichever it is I would make su'ah suffer with the guilt tearing him apart but still loving J and desperately trying to stay away but they keep crossing paths. Both of them would have meaningful character arcs. Su-ah coming to terms with what he did and having to learn control and distance, to wait for J to come to him and trust J can look after himself and J looking inward and releasing why not being an aplha messed him up so badly, finally accepting himself and maybe releasing su-ah is not the enemy. Bonus: I can draw so some panels could be nice to have in bits of the fic too.
If I do write it how would I let all the traumatised people here know though, I have a feeling ppl here are not in the fanfic sphere
I feel like I would also find a way to make su'ah bottom for J first. It would be interesting to explore that dynamic and how my versions of them would already have confessed feelings to eachother but J would still be nervous to do more and would mean su'ah offers to bottom first and like the idea never occurred to J he'd stare at su'ah for a sec and then be like "fuck yeah why didn't I think of that!" I'd write it as su'ah loving it because J is happy even though it's not fully his thing. Setting up bottoming as something not just an omega does for the alpha is a really fun way to get J more open to intimacy by showing him look this big ass alpha is so happy rn doing the thing you are terrified to and he's loving it. The fact that he loves it because he loves J and not bottoming would be a fun discovery later on too. I think I would make J a true switch though he'd just get to the point where he's very comfortable with intimacy and the position doesn't matter.
expect more as I get more ideas XD
Seeing these comments is giving me hope in the readers here again. sigh this sucks though.
This story has really devolved the more it goes on. Maybe it was always bad but at the start when we had alot less info I could atleast make various assumptions that suah was not the total manipulative l rapist dipshit that he is.









They said the rest is coming in about a MONTH. I couldn't believe my eyes. In 10 years I don't think I have ever witnessed such audacity.
XDDD All said with love while not perfect it's still free have a laugh and move on