I really tried to get into this story and it would have been great but jumping from past to present and back again was really confusing and there was no real like beginning or end or anything that resembled the timeline that could be easily understood it was all kind of a jumbled mess of information of course I did like the idea of the universe they were trying to build but it just didn't come across well
I found this story incredibly shorter than it could have been and I found the character of transfer student character was not needed in any part at all I thought he'd be like a new friend and someone that the main character could confide in or the new love interest but there was never enough story for him to need to so him even being in the story was completely pointless and the fact that the main character had a crush on his best friend for 8 years and apparently his best friend who also had a crush on him for an undetermined amount of time cuz they didn't tell us how long I found incredibly stupid these there is no need for the main character to worry about anyting once he found out that his best friend was already in love with him so there is no problems in his life for the story to continue
I really enjoyed this I find the art very adorable and it kind of has a good message about it being okay to love more than one person of course each one of them has a specific Dynamic to their character that makes them fit into the relationship which runs smoothly of course that could change when they get older but from the looks of it it doesn't seem like it will
Now this may sound dumb because the author didn't finish the story yet and maybe all the issues will be completed and sorted out by the time the end of the story comes but if he was just feeling empty because his dog died he could just get another dog it's not like he has to make a human into his dog to feel satisfied and if the secondary gender was a sub and Dom it does not specifically have to be sexual it could be personality-wise when the nurse was explaining it it had nothing to do with sex it said like protecting and wanting to follow their orders but it never specifically said anything about sex and if he was such a sub to begin with one and he have a completely different personality then someone who basically is angry all the time it's like all his whole personality is screaming that he doesn't want to be a sub but his body basically can't control itself so if the guy really is Dom you would never force rape real Dom's don't do that
I think there were a few things that could have been put in that were left out obviously they're going to do something about the father now legally because his mother woke up and that basically wraps up his story line but I feel like they could have went into more detail with the other boys family because it seems like the father wasn't there at all and the mother had a few screws loose which caused him to act the way he acted and it would have been nice to see how his upbringing turned him into a person that could think about killing people and animals
I am very disappointed in the end of the story after him sacrificing himself so much he had to die by something like poisoning it seems very dumb like they could have gave him a good death like he died fighting the Demon Lord but all he did was die from an after effect and the girl shooting him in the head even though she hated him for killing her brother she's now a killer so that makes absolutely no sense and also the part in the beginning the very first thing you see is his gravestone which basically tells you he's going to die either way and it doesn't matter if he is a hero or not











I found this story to be quite boring there is really nothing that had me excited to keep reading I just read it so that I could say I finished it the characters we're okay but none of them had a personality that really stuck out to me as great two of the characters were two conceited to actually step outside themselves entreated the main guy as a trophy to be won overall I'd say you could read the story if you had nothing else to read in your bored