Is it just me or do people only ever comment "pls switch" when its the "non traditional" looking characters that are top & bottom? Like I never see a bunch of comments wanting the characters to switch positions when its the usual large and stoic top x small and cute bottom but when the dynamic is the other way around all of a sudden everyone loves switching
Ark and Julius relationship is very cute and I like how tender he is with ark in not pushing for more until ark was ready, felt very organic.Will say that the story (altho I know it's not done) would've benifited more if it was longer. Like I wish we got to see the two graduallt realise their feelings for one another instead of it being immediate infatuation. Also would've been great if we had been given more world building before the abrupt time skip. It's kinda funny tho that their world randomly has mpreg?? And we still don't know why or how. Are all men in their world capable of giving birth? Is there a procedure or medicine you have to take or does it just require regular old cum?? Feels like this was thrown in to avoid any angst of "we can't be together because I can't give you a heir" or smth. Although I like Ark's and Julius relationship I kinda don't dig how much of a bitch ark is? Lol I'm sorry but theres no other way to describe his personality other than bitch and by that I mean hoq utterly spineless he is at all times? You can't have your uke be both weak physically (twink) and emotionally that's a deadly and annoying combo.
It's great that he figured out he needs to be kind to help his doomed future in anyway but that doesn't mean you gotta be a doormat bro T_T He really saw his OPP take his loyal as a dog man to his bedroom and thought aw shucks I guess Julius perfers him :/ Bitch what?? I get why he has insecruities but there has to come a time where you need to be confident and believe in your lover whom you've known for 10 yrs or your relationship will not work out. That guy was so close to raping Julius while your over there crying in your bedroom. And speaking of Julius I miss how he was A lot more expressive as a kid/teen compared to now it's like adulthood turned him into an outwarldy stone cold top
It's funny to think about how because mc got transported into a BL story and changed the character Hajin from a side top to the main mc/bottom, BL rules decitates that now Seo-woon must behave as the crazy top now. And not only that every elligible bachelor must also fall madly in love with mc over basically nothing lmao
But I agree with the other comments how this started off really strong and interesting but turned meh at the end. Feels like the author took on waaayyy too many plot points that they couldn't juggle well which caused the ending to be what it was, which is rushed as hell.
For example while I do like the desgin for Kim Shin his character was kinda pointless? His reasoning for why he sent incriminating photos to blogs was dumb as hell, and both for the reader and even Hajin it felt like we were never connected to Kim Shin as a charater anyway so the betreyal felt flat?
Like from the moment mc came into the world he was constantly giving the dude the cold shoulder and they never had a genuine moment between them it was just Kim Shin chasing after him like a dog while the mc couldn't care less. But all of a sudden I'm supposed to believe he felt hurt by the betrayal? Girl pls
Another area that really felt flat to me was the supposed second male lead from the webtoon Shin Yeo-woon who was not only introduced way too late but also felt like a very unneeded addition by the time he came in. Probably would've flowed better if he was in the University from the beginning instead of having him be in high school for a large chunk of Hajin developing a relationship with seo woon.
Even if we all know it was never going to be him, if we are going to have him here anyway then we might as well have developed a genuine bond between Hajin and Shin Yeo-woon to the point where we could see him as an actual potential option instead of his ass showing up mad late and contributing fuck all.
I don't even wanna touch on the insanity of the family plot but all I wanna say for that is that it would've been a lot more believeable if Hajin's brother was an affair baby instead. Because then it would make more sense why Hajin's dad and grandfather wanted to act like he doesn't exist despite being the better option?? He was more well behaved (before mc took over) and recieved better grades. Also the fact that they switched the brothers identities making Hajin the older one means his old ass brother was still attened high school is comical like what was the logic here??
Does anyone else really enjoy toko and luka's relationship dynamic? Well the bits that we got that is, like out of all the other zweilt pairs she is the one that he is closest to. Idk I love how she's always making an effort to try and bridge that gap Luka has with the others (as he was only close with yuki) while outside of tsukumo, luka is the only one toko allows herself to be vulnerable with. As she mentioned how she always has to be everyone else's big sister in a sense. I could honestly see these two together if yuki & luka were not a thing so I really enjoy their platonic bond
What I appreciate about this manga is that we get to see them navigate a gay relationship in Japan, from engagment to moving in and the fear of coming out to their friends & family while also expectedly fearing persecution from their coworkers. It's all done realistically.
I'm used to other BL mangas have the characters hide the fact that their dating another man from everyone in their social circle which is obviously understandable but it's nice to explore the opposite of that like what would it mean to be in an openly queer relatonship there and the effects it would have for them like the possibility of family disowning you or losing your job
I'm enjoying this so far since I really enjoy alpha x alpha!! Sidenote I'm on the early chapters but I feel like Junggil likes Jaeha's brother?? Idk he always seems excited when he's around. Edit: okay I caught up and I fucking knew he liked him!! Theres no way author randomly made one of the henchmen good looking for no reason while also having the brother constantly hang around still. I'm assuming they're going to be the side couple? Lol Jaeha & Jaeho dad is going to lose it if he finds out his second alpha heir won't have kids either
But does anyone else find it weird that Jaeha married essentially a gangster who kills people for a living? Like yea he fell in love at first sight and his husband clearly likes him back but it's odd that the most Jaeha has a problem with is Taekeon coming back injured but not him offing people...
Like at least with other bl stories with the loan shark/gangster aspect mc is justified in associating with gangsters because he has to pay off a large debt whereas in this story Jaeha is willingly involving himself with them??











Love how this was a light hearted funny chapter of dojin reacting like his own dad did in the past being hella dramatic but some of the comments are taking this soooo seriously
Also some of you are misunderstanding yes Dojin is prob more protective because Byul is dating an alpha but lets be real for a sec guys, Byul could have brought home an omega and dojin still would have had a fit. He views Byul as his baby boy and doesn't want to face the fact that he's grown now and will be dating