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i like their history together but i hate it when the story spends so much time on the flashbacks.... like man atp just write that, forget the bodyswap plot. lets be stuck at the past.
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Frfr It’s hit a point sometimes I just skim the flashbacks. If it’s happening that early in the story, just start the story off with that rather than toss us into a flashback.
Especially when a lot of times we still get the same information through the main story (like when characters have a thought or two about the past, or if characters talk abt it)
this is one of those rare good stories you find once in a while. my only complaints are:
1) the stiff expressions of the mc and ml.
how are the secondary characters (coco, lewis, villains, etc) more expressive than the actual main characters??? i get that they're calmer and more collected, but their expressions look the same in everything...
2) the romance.
it's cute but i wish there were more chemistry between ml and mc..
i also don't rlly get how the ml went from pitying her to falling in love with her. even the second prince falling for mc felt so abrupt. the only one that made sense was the count liking her honestly (albeit in a sick twisted way)