hmmm this ending felt way too rushed. you can see it in the art too, some of the bodies and faces are terribly wonky. guess the author wanted to wrap this up.
im dead lol you plan some time alone without your kids and the best thing you plan is to get into a car to get it on?? the sink wasn't enough i see.
Gurl, they couldn’t even make it out the car Hahahahaha!
this is great.
portrays so many of the maybe mundane but everyday banter that really shows who the characters are and how their feelings grow. it feels so rooted in everyday occurences.
def deserve a 9+
idk why this story just felt like a wattpad novel lol. something about it felt disjointed and i feel like i never bonded with any of the characters. the seme for some reason also rubs me the wrong way? it feels like theres a conscious attempt to display him as a green flag, communicative, caring dude but theres a mismatch between language, emotional delivery from the visuals and just overall vibe. idk if its just me.
overall im not sure if this series is a 9+ rating at all but thats just my two cents.
No I second this.
The story felt very childish (idk if right word) to me.
The author desperately tried to make Nick a green flag but I kept feeling a weird vibe from him.
wtf was that ending lol - that was too willy nilly seemed like the author just wanted to wrap stuff up.
?? he's gonna come back to life thats too anticlimatic
this is always so goood omg