Does Ian get a reality check? Or does Micheal eventually get a back bone? I read while ago and I haven’t read the updated chapters yet. Ian is so calculated and controlling while poor Micheal is just oblivious? So oblivious that he’s ignorant to Ian’s behavior. Sometimes Ian straight out says he wants him dead and Micheal is like “oh..uh..well I still love you”.
Like is there development? I feel like I need to let this marinate some more.
Read the first 10 chapters and was like yeah, lemme waste my art drawing that shit. That’ll give me recognition.
Toxic yaoi my ass. Both characters suck. The situation they’re in feels like the author asked ChatGPT to cook up some slop to write. MC is just a horndog. That’s it.
ML is abused. So abuse that I can’t take his abuse seriously because the author doesn’t take it seriously. I don’t feel sad. I don’t shed a tear. Nothing. I can’t feel uncomfortable because ML doesn’t show that he’s uncomfortable. I don’t have to go above and beyond for the author either because their writing is absolute shit. I don’t need to fill in the blanks because their ass suck so much to include it. Nah. Fuck that.
Oh well ever sexual assault victim is different”. Well duh. Anyone with a brain will know that. But this? There’s none. The characters around him suck. They don’t take his abuse seriously. So he doesn’t either. Just a shitty situation all around.
The art is good, I’ll give the author that.
But I can’t get into the story. Why do you need to show detailed scenes of rape of ML and that fucking fossil? Why do you need to depict the ML ENJOYING the assault? It makes the reader confuse on what you’re trying to convey? I’m tired of seeing depictions of assault as enjoyable to the victim. Blushing? Like come the fuck on. I’m scrolling pass smut scenes so I can see how this is going to play out.
And to top it off, he’s still fucking alive. And he has fucking power. POWER!
I do like that a blue collar worker represents the majority of how fuck this situation is. And how slimy rich old bastards are deprived of anything that they go above and beyond to scratch their itch. He’s going to get what’s coming to him regardless, but we’re reading an author’s sick fetish disguised as plot.









This shit gets dumber and dumber
and im still gonna keep reading