3 whole effin chapter of sex that added nothing to the story and the "baby"... what the fak. This story had the potential to blend comedy with plot and heart. Instead you get a bunch of unlikeable characters, nonsensical development, and forced "comedy". It's such a waste. The art theoretically should've gotten better as the artist has more experience, it seemed to get worse until the characters started to look so much more boxy than human. Just an overall extremely mid mpreg bait.











I wish the "kid" MC was actually a really smart kid and not a 30 year old woman that lusts after her "father's" guards/other older men. The author should've made a premise in which because the MC has been in this world for a bit they forget their other world and has melded into the mind of a child. But no they keep constantly reminding us that is a THIRTY FUCKING YEAR OLD in a child's body. Constantly mentioning alcohol, men, and other things from her "other life". As soon as I start liking "Leo" the character, the author goes and pulls some cringe old woman shit and it gets on my nerves so bad. Trying to finish this story but the author seems to have some self insert fantasies because I can't help but feel how unlikeable "Leo" is when this author keeps reminding us of the 30 year old woman who snatched the life of the REAL kid.
I get what you're saying. It'd have probably turned out even more wholesome if that were the case. I do think her being honest about her thoughts and not behaving like a child creates an interesting dynamic between her and Phileo but it'd definitely be creepy to have a kid looking at you in a perverted manner. ( ̄∇ ̄")
Plus, having a muscle fetish is Leo's character trait. Wouldn't it have been fun if we saw how she developed it in this new life as she grew up rather than already having it?