Many plot holes. Too many. You came into power by way of BETRAYAL, your helper in the betrayal becomes your right hand & talks smack and questions you and you don't think hmmmm, this dude might betray me for a bigger payload????? BFFR and to make matters worse, this read more like a fantasy of sorts.
I thought she was a tough girl but she folds too easily. Dropping this while I'm still sane.
It was so so unnecessary. It didn't add anything to the story, if anything, it took away from the whole story. Wish I could unread this.
But the fact that he did that . 2nd ml was a better pick. Uke has some type of Stockholm. Read it to completion coz I was already knee deep in this sh1t. Uke was better off with 2nd guy or alone and focusing on his career. The was so unnecessary too, it didn't add anything of substance to the story. If anything, it diminished the story telling.
Lost me with the . Dropping this