also, didn't like that there was no smooth transition from chloe's shy/oblivious to bold/aware attitude, which is one of her traits that were considered as charming, it felt like I was reading another character once her status changed
It’s not really smooth but I can see where her boldness is from. She’s reincarnated into another person body and keep herself low and doesn’t dare to speak up. But her boldness definitely come from someone who desire to change just like her past life. I think you should re-read and look at her perspective more.









I loved this !! So refreshing to see how well their personalities match, how they developed their relationship over time (it felt natural and personal) and all their interactions felt too intimate. I even teared up at some point lmao, they deserve each other and that happy ending! (▰˘◡˘▰)