I haven't checked on this story in MONTHS and all I have to say is, THE TOPS ASSES ARE STILL SO FLAT. Like, in most BLs there is a little bit of cake going on, not really a nice booty but it's not noticeable to mention in a good or bad light.
But here?! Nothing and it's confusing cause they're so built. No squats?! It honestly feels intentional. You think they're the type of dudes who dont do squats or work on legs because they think its gay?
Hey, on a real note, shout out to all the flat booties out there! Y'all matter too.
I CRAVE this dynamic so much!! Talon pinching Sajuns face like, "look at ny poor baby!! He was almost made UGLIER" but its all said with love. An over protective mentor will get me going every time!! (I thought that's what i was getting in Backlight but I was WRONG!)
The scene while they were eating lunch, though somewhat serious in conversation, was so cute and funny. Talon demanding more food and Sajun just going along with it was so funny and perfect. I will say, the boss being jealous is a little crazy because Sajun literally said that's his uncle, but we'll see.
The smut is 10/10, the story is 10/10, the characters are 10/10, the mentor and student dynamic is a 10/10. I found gold with this one.
I'm BARKING!! I haven't read a BL i loved this much since, "The Third Ending" WOOF!!! Sajun is my life and he is my light, AND MY HEART!!!!
Best MC around! And TALON! Listen, loooooooooove him! Man, the smut is good and the storyline so interesting!! I'm just as hyped as if I was reading a shounen!!
I can't wait to see more of Talon and Sajun's relationship because mentor (self appointed father more like) and student (adopted son) is my favorite dynamic.
I've seen a lot of people being mad/annoyed at Manny's relationship towards The Priest and it feels like y'all are mad at MANNY and that's irksome.
Manny throws a fight to earn money for his family, never receives that money, is visually impaired in one eye to the point he has to give up his DREAM of boxing, his brother DIES, he gets revenge, joins a gang and is at the lowest he's ever been. Then BOOM The Priest shows up.
The Priest provides him emotional stability, an anchor for his despair, and is a safe space for him under the guise of religion. He's a victim who believes he deserves whatever the Priest throws his way. To get him to turn in the Priest or against him is going g to be very hard because Manny is so indebted to him.
I think its really unfair to be mad at him when its so ridiculously sad. Of course he's not as mad as the ML about the assault because Manny really feels like it's his own fault.
Im so jealous of the people that will find this story when its done. Waiting weekly is KILLING ME! And the chapters are short too so its torture! I'm feeling like Tantalus, in this Chilli's tonight!!
When the top and bottom are just ENTHRALLED by each other (with the top just being a bit more obsessed), it beats all other BL's. The Third Ending has a similar dynamic and it always makes me so weak and giddy!
Their kids are so cute too!! I want to see the twins meet their uncle, aunt, and cousin as well!!! This has a lot of smut but you can really tell the love each other and it's not just just. I hope we get a side story of the friends
I am actually SO SO SOOOO happy the Two Alphas didn't hook up. They don't like each other/ aren't attracted to each other and that's perfect. Some poly relationships are 2 people that just like the one but are still friends. Both like the bottom (Nurse has liked him for YEARS and seriously doubt he'd ever choose gym teacher over him) I loved that bottom in this too. He has one singular braincell who's running off of nothing but coffee and dreams lol.
Also, I know they'd just make the Nurse the bottom and then it becomes so bland, that would irk me so bad. I like when that character type tops.
One last thing, I feel like this author watched/read Katekyo Hitman Reborn! Because this dynamic is seriously 802759 (IYKYN) but like an adult version, obviously. (I will also bring up, That when I was a teen i didn't like 8059, still don't. But if Tsuna is with them, then it's perfect)
I'm feeling very, "There is no war in Ba Sing Se" right now. I can't handle the tragedy coming! So, im going to skip the chapter and need someone to explain it to me 4kids style. I talking full censorship of the tragedy!!
No one is dieing they are simply being sent to the Shadow Realm.
The MC has every right to be mad at the ML! I'm feeling a little crazy about everyone being annoyed at the MC and want him to be the Jealous one and do the chasing.
The ML for YEARS have been scenting the Mc to the point where the Mc has to rely on him. The ML not only didn't just disrespect the MC's boundaries but has disgustingly over stepped them. Now, I personally like a toxic relationship but let's not act like the Mc is the bad guy in this situation.
If the Mc and ML had a personality swap all sympathy would leave for the ML and everyone would talk about how he really messed the MC up
The MC can't even get into a different relationship because of how much the ML has messed up his pheromones.
All this said. I still want them together because this is a little dark and messed up and I like that. It's just really annoying to act like the bottom is the red Flag when he's at worse beige and the top is 100% AT LEAST a yellow flag.
I have a Controversial Hot Take/Opinion and I know no one is going to agree with me.
I really wish Hyunsuk properly confessed when he was younger. I'm a sucker for childhood friends and I feel like they would've been really compatible. He gave up without trying because he truly cherished their friendship and didn't want to hurt Hyuk. The doctor is ok but he's way too manipulative ( honestly, his doctor license should be revoked! Lol this should be called, 'Love Me Malpractice) idk.
Hyunsuk and Hyuk are honestly my type of ship I like when I watch a show. A lot of fan fiction material between the two.
Seeing everyone genuinely despise this story is so heartwarming. Like, there is usually so much fighting in the comments but this was sooooo ass we put our differences aside to remember how upsetting this one was.
I like to come back to this webtoon and not read it but whenever I get mad at a new one, I have to compare it to this one. This was also my first DNF webtoon, I would come back to skim to see what's going on but that's it.
It's crazy how genuinely UPSET this one made me. I am still, too this day, Yahwi's #1 hater.
MY BABY!!!! QUICK, I need someone to invent a way for me to jump into this webtoon. I gotta start killing these fools, John Wick style, so my son will be safe!
Also, hot take, and I know I'll get disliked for this but Seo in really annoyed me this chapter. I get feeling responsible for being the reason someone you loved getting beaten and bullied half to death, but that would make me want to be with them MORE.
You're feeling guilty, of course, but I'd want to hear from my loved one what happened. I'd want to apologize and comfort them not completely ghost them! Like, your loved one was the one who was abused!! I can feel guilty but I can't make it about myself and now my lover has to be the one to coddle and comfort ME because of my guilt! Hello??!?! My guilt doesn't out weigh their actual PAIN!
I think the MC's boyfriend was actually no good and came on to the FL first. The blonde was trying to prove a point but went about it in an immature way.
I genuinely feel like the blonde always had good intentions with the MC and was a good friend (besides kissing the bf but I really do feel like the BF was secretly slimy and initiated but we'll see). The issue comes from that mean friend in her group (who i think liked the blonde)
Idk... the GL has misunderstandings written all over it.
Ok, so my prediction is, Yeon is going to distance himself from Kihoon when he gets back and plans to have Kihoons memories erased because Yeon blames himself for all of Kihoons misfortune. This is going to be his way of "protecting" Yeon. They forget eqch other and Yeon is going to temporarily by with that girl at the beginning (the one with the string) But then BOOM! We get a reincarnated version of the prince/general that trained Kihoon. Who just so happens to be Yeons new GF's older sibling
And now Yeon is going to try to stop the Prince from hurting Kihoon because the prince also remembers Kihoon and still wants control over him and possibly revenge for his death? Idk I have idea i just want MOOORE!
*Sees the top by placed in a triangle hold be the bottom*
HOW DOES IT FEEL TO LIVE MY DREAM?!?! Do you SEEEEEE that Omegas thighs?!?! Top 5 ways to die for sure.
If there's Angel Mitsuki.... There's probably Devil Aya!!!! I NEEDD TO SEE!!! PUHLEASE!!! I want them in a couple costume so so so bad!!
It's honestly such a whiplash comparing this to the Main Story and the BL side story. Like, the author, i think HATES the other couples or something because it's so dark, and tbh, DIABOLICAL!!
And this one? Healthy BDSM, communication, sadism done in a way that you still are showing you love your partner. They are both so charming and funny. It's WILD.
They're so cute! And Daehan had my HEART! I've never seen a more honest, and genuinely kind mc in my life!! He acknowledged when he's the problem, always expresses how he feels, and is so open about how he feels!! Misunderstanding Troupe HATES hime because he won't let it be!!
Also, this may be just me, but they're so FushiIta coded (Megumi and Yuji from jjk) like, whenever I read fanfic, this is the dynamic!
Yeah, I like this author, but this one is a miss for me. Im not like the type of BL fan that's "Green Flag and Pure ships ONLY" i love a toxic and controversial story but this?
BH (Black Hair guy) has known WH (White Hair Guy) since he was a child, and even told said child to call him mom. BH allegedly got hard from being called mom?! Hello?! I figure it's from fantasies of being with WH's father but that's just gross.
I'm never going to shame a mommy/daddy kink (not for me and that's ok) But allegedly (because we haven't gotten the full story yet) getting hard for hearing a CHILD call you mom is awful. And ENCOURAGING IT?!?! JAIL!
Like I said, I read toxic and messed up stuff (I'm talking Slammer Dogs type messed up) But I draw the line any direct/indirect sexual anything involving children that's written in a romantic way.
















