4/5
This feels like they are playing house? ML is trying to catch a feeling he hasn’t had before.
I want to like this fully but I can’t. It’s not realistic enough. Yes it’s a fictional BL… but ML thinking MC will be satisfied with him..? When the title is called boredom. I don’t feel like the chemistry is there enough, for either of them to be this attached yet. Like it’s forced almost? I feel ML has a dark side that hasn’t been unleashed yet, the author has made it know but… idk and I feel the MC is too naive in a way? He takes everything at face value and once he learns something new about ml he starts treating him like a kid almost? And we can see ML has been neglected. Honestly, taeshin (ML) needs therapy. I mean hella therapy. MC was so chill with him saying he wanted to ruin him… and we could have definitely explored the MLs dark side more, if anything I would have loved to see it, him spiraling, them both going insane but mending each other ( yes I’m into psychological bl). Idk… like with ML history of new person every night. I just felt like there could have been more to this story. And the reason for ML to like him is off too but whatever. ML is hot asf, and I’d let him top me any day. I liked the MC and he was able to say no, but I felt like author could have given him 1 or two past dating experiences to make it more realistic bc he would know what date is. 1. ML or deranged tall rich man whore cat like personality guy is not realistically going to last long.
This was the most annoying read ever, besides the side couple. The main couple had 0 communication it was 60+ chapters of the seme not saying shit and just acting with his body, the uke said he wasn’t going to do the deed unless it’s his soulmate ( which he never showed his imprint to even confirm.. and never spoke), kept sighing randomly?, also withholding his imprint ( with someone initials ( everyone has). The uke or MC was so annoying, jumping to conclusions, not able to separate work and personal life, also not speaking up. For 70 chapters. I kept giving it a chance only for the side toxic couple I loved them idc.
She’s dumb asf. How are you a #3 werewolf, own a private detective agency, and trying to become the leader when you have zero instincts? Just a dumb F k and waste of time. I genuinely despise FL like this it’s a hard read, having a man play you? He hit you with his car…. You didn’t see his car was still and sitting there already? He accelerated fast af and you got hit? What about his evil side, you can’t sense that either? Or the blood he has on him from killing werewolves bc he has anger built up? He’s truly boring asf and she can’t see past his “ I’m a national treasure” like gtfu and stop being dumb. She only see he’s power he has to make wolves stronger and apparently believes he doesn’t know about it?!? Hmm… interesting… especially with how many times he shows up unexpectedly…? Let’s use our brain. I can’t read anything with a dumb and irritating fl. No wonder your dad didn’t make you the leader.
Highkey shit take fr
Lowkey a bad take i think u should keep reading they are honestly playing each other and she has the control the whole time, especially towards the end where the last chapters are out. She’s using him and is dominating him like crazy lol but she is tough and takes care of herself its fine if she messes up atleast it gives room for a romantic scene ykwim
Whoa dude that’s unfair as fuck to say I’m not gonna lie. Sounds like you were expecting a “smart” mary sue of some sort. You want her to be a one dimensional idiot? Just say you hate when a character acts because of their flaws.
Let’s think for a second. She grew up strong but with an obvious inferiority complex. Stuff like that, once it’s developed, no matter how smart or strong you are a mental disorder can fuck that up. So yeah although his approaches were way too obvious, she was greedy over the fact that he could boost her powers. And idk what you’re saying about her lacking instincts because she did find it suspicious but she ignored it willingly (you can see when she does that) and then pushes the “national treasure” thing to actually anchor it because she wants him to remain “innocent” (you saw how happy she got when he got attacked/ it shows how important her pushing his “innocence” was to her). I doubt you gotta think too hard about that to see it. So obviously learning about his actual intentions she’s gonna react like ‘shit bro this is so messed up’ or something cause she fucked up but she has too much pride to blame herself so she’d rather aim the full force of that anger at him. I mean that’s literally just her personality, she’s clumsy, prideful, and strong. Acting like some cold calculating fool sort of completely goes against that persona. Instead she’s smart and consistently putting on a show for her own benefit. She calculates only things that actually give her a reason to put attention on them (like his suspicious behavior) which builds up and makes her act. She just needed evidence to erase her doubts. So although it took some time she still went looking for the evidence.
Just because she needs a little push to look past her greed and find out the truth, that doesn’t make her a dumb character. Shes not a psychopath or someone with a violent traumatic past (well I’m assuming from what we’ve seen so far), she only developed an inferiority complex and a prideful ego growing up because of her circumstances, so if you’re someone who just reads and expects the “fl” “ml” to be a certain way based on other stories you’ve read, you’re not gonna be able to enjoy one with unique and flawed dynamics.
Damn! Who hurt you? I love how real she is
I finished reading all the chapters in May, however I’m still mad at this. Look I like toxic maybe just a little but reading all 101 ch pissed me tf off. Not once was Ian speaking the truth to Jo. Not once. Maybe he was trying to convince himself that but it was never there. The amount of time he just let TJ do whatever, the amount of TJ getting his hole in between being with Jo? He never told Jo he was getting railed by TJ but ofc Alex had his suspicions but never confronted him. JO risked himself for Ian so many times. His hole has to be good. Like he watched someone die for him, he nearly shot someone for him? And Ian was so wrong. TJ and him deserved each other. However I couldn’t watch the ending, I wished one of them died, or it was a murder suidxe, a tragic ending. Bc to me this was a tragic ending. I’m just glad JO wasn’t involved more and could move on. Bc he seems like a lover boy I feel bad for him but Ian was making him unrecoverable
Remember nobody or Ian asked Jo to all that, if I could remember Ian warn him to stay away.
So if you're going to blame anyone blame birdbrian Joseph.
Just sexist af. Jo isn't entitled to Ian's body or time or anything. They weren't in a relationship. You be acting like Ian held the dude at gun point and told him to kill himself. Jo did it himself. Blame him for being a navie ass bitch
I'm glad I don't finish this. I was so angry about that too. So dissapointing
This is probably one of my few comments, but this was a masterpiece. I need it to be completed like today. I was laughing every minute of each chapter, this is my taste to a T. Like I love everything about it. Ugh thank you yaoi gods.
please I was expecting it to end right when they met each other again BUT IT KEPT GOING. This is so sad but really is life.
So glad I came back to read the last chapter... LITERALLY WAS SCREAMING WHEN HAE CAME IN THE ROOM HEARING HIS NAME SBAGGAVVDHWDDVSV
Where’s my reunion chapter?