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Well that was a fast ending. I don't even feel like he had the emotional evolution to be a guiding God. He was getting really arrogant and seemed to be losing his original questionable intent well In my opinion he was.

There was so much potential for future stories not only about the new world but about the dragon God who Lucia really was, why she was half, how her world really felt about her. Maybe a story about the failed magic mage. Maybe info about the gods of the new world. I don't know I felt like were building up to something really cool but suddenly they threw in a new God and then instantly defeated said God by having him give up and then suddenly our guy with no training instantly knows how to be a god a thinks he will bring it all to peace? Will he though? Maybe.

Well I didn't dislike the story I really liked it but the ending was resolved instantly and I didn't like that.

The concept confuses and kind of annoys me. I only read chapter 0 and only a part of it but it annoyed me.

First how did humans predict the monsters coming? what the heck was there some prophet that predicted the monsters coming? Or did they find a random one already dead and predict it was coming? Did they get a glimpse of another dimension or something?Did an unknown voice provide secret knowledge and say prepare for monsters are coming?

2nd- why are they called awakeners when their just given cards by the humans that researched things? They didn't awaken anything from what I could tell.

3rd- how did humans create something to fight a monster they've never met? And give it to rando's (random people) if it was the government that funded or did this secret research. why give it to powerless citizens? Wouldn't giving it to trained soldiers have given their research a leg up if something went wrong.

4th-Were human not a system or a god what advantage do we get giving it to random people. Wouldn't they have at least created a team governed by their research team so they'd have control and get benefits? Is this force just super humane?

But anyways maybe that's all explained later but that premise annoyed me enough to be like are you kidding and so I didn't want to read.

Quick synopsis of what I read:

monsters suddenly appeared and weapons couldn't beat them, then buildings transformed or something happened from purple light and all these places which happened to be skyscraper like buildings they decided to call dungeons because they were swarming with monsters. And then humanity which had been doing secret research in preparation for the coming of these creatures created key cards which summon creatures to fight for them which does come off a lot like yugioh but not like a card game like the holographic projections that are real. And then they give these cards to people and call them awakeners....or some rando for whatever reason is supposedly awakened and they give him a card? I don't know, it got absurd for me and I quit but if it's your thing enjoy reading.

Just thought you guys deserved a bit more info since there wasn't many comments.

Hmm that was an anticlimactic ending. It wasn't bad but felt slightly rushed. Mostly because they were amping up for some big reveal but it was resolved really fast And without much emotion referenced even the fact he slept with a guy wasn't gone to or even that the ml was an alpha. It just turns it all sweet and trys to come of that way but for once I feel like those other emotions were needed. It just doesn't fit to me. But at the same time it wasn't really bad but just a feeling of what just happened plays through my mind and I feel a bit cheated. I do wonder why the author choose this route?

Ack to end it that way, I soooo want to see what happens next. Will it be a reveal, will it be steamy will they make up. I got questions. But sexy sexy would be nice.

That was probably the most absurd story I've ever read but yet funny and interesting all at the same time. But dang that ending was disgusting and so absurd. Saving the world with cum. Obviously that's the way it should always be done. I've never seen something so stupid lol yet surprisingly sweet at times to and somewhat deep though it'd be even better if it was even more developed but for an erotic manga it's way more than I ever expected. How is it possible that this was good? Lol I never expected to like this as much as I did the entire concept is stupid weird and hilarious. But it works I enjoyed the story and the side stories made it even better.

Though I do think three legged weirdo would have been a good title to. But hero works to lol.

Huh that ending while not bad doesn't tell you anything about how it goes. How do they resolve conflict? What happens with the brother? Does he kill the alpha or attempt to kill his brother because he can't have him? Does he try to kill all the humans out of frustration and lunacy? Do the outsiders ever get a peace treaty and get treated well? Do they become partners? Do they join And start as lower class? Or are they treated like equals? Are they treated like slaves or labor? Do the humans spread outside I would have loved to see what happens next. Shame they choose not to show anything but the ending wasn't horrible though even with their relationship it would have been nice to see where it goes.

Is that the ending?

I both like and dislike the ending it feels a bit rushed for some reason though. Kind of feels like they were taking it one way but then back tracked and then tried to make it work after changing it.

Why did ano turn into a brother? Also the end conflict seemed resolved fast even though I dislike conflict he left and then just went back to him in 2 seconds I don't know something seems odd about the direction the story took at that point.

also is it me or did the art work at the end down grade?

I'm so rooting for our guy to fall for his love interest. hatono I mean.

Personally I don't dislike their banter it's just the typical banter between two love birds/ slash rivals that have a lot of pent up frustration because they won't do anything to each other that's why Leon says their flirting. Also it's just a bunch of worry on both sides.

And I don't dislike the main guy because he's just insecure because she's the only one that's really been there for him or cared about him. It's in his past ark I don't remember all the details but he had it bad originally abusive parents I think maybe being on the streets maybe he feels like a gutter rat. I just remember it sounding really sad and then our girl earned his trust and only she did everyone else betrayed or hurt him to the point he lashes out first. He's the typical the world did me bad so I'm super cold yet I'm supposed to save the world trope character. You know the ones who'd rather end it because it's just sucked for them and they can't trust anymore and they refuse to get companions or they turn them into fodder or minions.

But in this story he gets a second chance and he finds out he was wrong he thought he was abandoned but he wasn't so he feels touched and amazed and many different feelings and even wants to return her but he also doesn't want to let her go. He's also afraid of being alone again because she was all he had. The only one he let in. The one who forced her way in. It's hard to let go of something super important to you when it's the only goodness you have ever known.

So in my opinion so what if he shows a little immaturity so does she and everyone else. But I just feel like it's fear and insecurity and all of them are feeling that.

What am I on a streak my favorite stories all keep ending on messed up cliffhangers.....ahhhh I want to know what happens darn. Shucks. Great story though I really like it. I hope it ends happily though.