As of chapter 22 the pacing and storytelling is really poor. I will say I am impressed with the few demonstrations of formal dress showing how the stays would be pinned in place. Also equality in how they both got nipple color dots. XD So used to the MLs losing their nipples in the war so good for him!
Seems to be a multi-layered case of regression and reincarnation so far, but with how poorly its portrayed it can be difficult to see how things are divided. Kind of how sometimes uploaders accidentally put a different stories chapter in is how the splits feel sometimes, but its all one story.
Its giving Lloyd and Javier vibes. Not as extreme with the faces and butt up groveling, but still nice.
But then I remembered where we are in the story. Oof. Our poor guys.
This was so satisfying I read it all in one sitting... I can see the morning sun through the curtains... worth it. Also seeing Remi and Angel side by side was giving me The Wallflower vibes. Dark Remi moments just give such Sunako Nakahara vibes with this art style.
Not gonna lie kinda hope they just gave her a body enhancement stone and that she is just gonna hit the ground like a comet then just gather those wedding skirts and run like crazy. Man thats some Maddie shit. This MC needs a little more gumption.
Really going in for a push down kiss after just saying you had been hanging out in the red-light district? I know its not his fault that the author makes them do questionable ish, but ugh.
You know its kind of satisfying seeing him flounder after he ruined the life of the woman who loved him once and bore him a child. Mommy was an occult lady too even if not to the MCs level. Hope Grandpa isn't a wimp.
ML has just chugged a whole keg of Love and Respect my Wife juice. Love seeing it and he is working hard and doing his homework behind the scenes.
I have read to many damn books that my brain has gone weird. I was irritated by the wrong chapter 16 and how things are being uploaded incorrectly or maybe the story itself is just getting choppier, but I was just happy for Al getting to have nipples. Like most guys don't even get a color patch to represent a nip and our boy here got a whole defined little nip. Good for him. XD
I read ch 16 here https://comix.to/title/87e3e-seijo-sama-no-gyaku-harem-kara-abureta-kishi-sama-ni-netsuretsu-ni-kyuuaisareteiru-ken/10277889-chapter-16