Punchline: The storyline is like written by a 13 year old newborn fujoshi in wattpad like come on.
This would be so much better if the author actually focused on the plot. Like I guess the author wants to put sexual violence in this story, which I dont blame since some stories are interesting in their own way, however, i think the author should put the resolve in this matter ('Rape is Rape', no matter how they try to explain the seme's backstory. Like for example, if someone steals but they reasoned out theyre poor. Does it mean stealing is good? Absolutely not. Is it justifyable? What theyre doing is illegal, so still no) I guess its rushed since the story isnt getting good responses from readers?
The end is pretty rushed, sounds like a third-rate wattpad story, art was good but really lacked the essence of the storyline. Really hope for improvements in the storyline for the author. They have rooms for improvements and I hope they listen to the readers as well.
ps. yall know what the ending should be? Seme in Jail hahaha cock
I hate yohan but damn thats hot. Really passable as shounen ai at this point but ofc
I bet that the Yoo Jonghyuk -face in this Episode has more emotions than the actual YJH
Ikr it looks kinda weird to me because I'm not used to it
The line, "10 minutes was enough" looks so wrong out of context :"))
The whole ass plot is confusing and the way the monologues are written are also confusing. I Stopped mid-chapters as it was getting boring and unengaging, doesnt really add much to the fact that the progression is going to a cliché route where its going to a narrow route of a storyline.
Though this is only my perspective, yall may enjoy this but personally i dont. The art is good but I had to stop reading since the supporting characters dont have much uniqueness and further development.
Happy reading everyone!
I understand if it isn't your type of read but I don't get how you find it confusing? It's basically thrown all out on the table...
Well I mean true they did show the mc's goal and stuff like that, but the confusing part for me was how the author wanted to show the other characters? And the progression is confusing since its too fast i guess?
Maybe im just dumb to not realize sht but yes i apologize Hahahahaha
Ah it's okay the human mind is different to each their own I do agree on with the fact it's rushed though ;p