i mean it's not BAD bad. i just think it just lacks depth, details, and context...
literally my /only/ problem with this is how weird the story is at first... and that goddamn neck size. overall, i think this is a good read
beta
bro fell in love with his abuser
You mean: bro sold his body to abuser, then fell in love with him!
Lmao right! They act like Dan's a child & didn't sign away his body . The only thing he didn't sign up for was the thing with the actor (when Joo secretly showed him Dan naked/ getting fucked that time)