I agree with everyone about the ending and after word.
The FL's mother asking to be reincarnated as the FL's daughter was weird.
Karzel being 3 or 4 feet taller than Reia was a little off.
But Penzel boy and the FL's daughter being officially shipped was really weird to see. She looks like a 10yr old or yonger while Penzel is like 18 or something.
Other than all that I liked the story. It was simple, but still had drama and happiness. We get a happy ending and the FL and ML didn't have to forgive anyone but eachother, maybe their son counts?
What I mean by that is her real father and step mother were evil and the dukes mom was also evil, but the author didn't force forgiveness and instead they were killed for their transgressions.
The duke had the FL's father killed and she didn't feel bad for him nor angry at her husband (wow a real normal reaction in my webcomic?).
The the dress sticking out and if that wasn't bad enough, the twig in the middle of a city alleyway.
I like the story but really? I feel like there's a disparity between the illustrator and the novel.
I hope the story and everything goes well! I wonder if the art quality will drop?
He's totally fallen for her he just doesn't know it yet!
While I enjoy this comic 15ch my literal thought, "Penetration isn't the only to get an STD or get pregnant."
Sorry but remember always use condoms even during oral cause throat STIs aren't fun. Sadly you can get some from kissing.
I wonder if the princess is just coincidentally involved in Titianas life or if they somehow know eachother?
The princess is just interested in ruining everyone's lives, so I wouldn't be surprised if they've never known eachother ever.
She's painfully, embarrassingly, unabashedly stupid. I barely survived while trying to reach the point of the brown hairs ML's confession and her accepting it. (Granted some of it is funny while some of it feels too much)
I thought other stories had stupid FL's but I was wrong. Other stories had people saying how bad the second-hand embarrassment was for the FL while reading, but for me those stories weren't to bad because you can see why the FL did what she did especially when you consider her age or the environment she grew up with. Or her overall situation.
But this woman, she is the actual woman they need to be referred too. I can understand why the author took this route; it's because no one has honestly tried to do this for the 2ML and usually just try to romance him or keep him away from the ogFL's life. In the process of trying to make a story that stands out, the author made an idiot for a main character. But maybe they wanted to have her make stupid decisions and mistakes that other FL's don'tmake inorder for the story to stand out? (Who of us would actually do every single thing she did and be discovered so quickly?)
But atleast she accepted the brown hair ML's confession quickly and won't be as stupid now, right? I held on till now, so hopefully the worst is behind me.
Not time shenanigans! I'm gonna need a spreadsheet in the shape of a spiderweb!
Don't tell me the real heroine is an assasin like that one webcomic on webtoon where the FL trys to get away from the villian ML and ends up with these fruit fairies?
Edit: found it, it's called " Ten wants to be dumped by a tyrant"
I've tried to read this story twice over the last 6yrs and I can never complete it. Something is just wrong with it for me.
I guess everyone saying it's the writing and storytelling that's wrong must be right, because that's usually what makes me skim, skip to the end and or straight up drop the story.
I like the art and the ML's design because it's unique. Pretty much the only thing I like about the story.
The prince should be the one on the frontlines throwing people around not the duke. The king claims to care about the duke, but if he really did he wouldn't have sent him to the battle field his whole life.
Say whatever you want about it ruining the princes mind, but look at him now. Just a push and the fl with be in a private cell for him.
The only thing I disliked was how their first night went. She was blindfolded, which was how every woman went to the bed chamber but none slept with him. The worst part was at the beginning of the first night where he had her give him a blow job in which he did nothing forceful, the rest he treated her right.
Other than that I liked the story. His revenge was basically that blowjob and the truth comes out pretty quickly so you don't have to wait long. It's not a nightmare suffer corn thankfully. They love eachother and make up without having to grovel.
I wish there was a "put this on shelf till this number of chapters". Because one chapter is not enough for so many comics.
I know the child harem is creepy when you remember her as an adult, but let me explain something for everyone about children. When I was 4yrs old I was in a friend group with 3 boys, because all of the girls bullied me for being dressed like a cute little girl and the fact that these boys had a crush on me.
Anyway, these 3 boys had a crush on me and I had a crush on one of the boys and we discussed marriage. He also told my parents that he wanted to marry me, I kissed his hand btw. This continued into middle school, we never went passed a kiss on the cheek.
The fact that these boys have a crush on her isn't suprising to me in the least especially when you consider how capable and cool she is. I'm glad that her family are angry and disturbed about her already being spiritually married to Whale, as they should be.
Don't forget folks, if your partner is going to be immortal without you make sure to receive the boom-clap to stay together!
I liked Quaren's and Alia's after story along with the villians in exile! They genuinely made me laugh!
Bye bye Hexion and Adele! It's rare for me to remember the main characters and even some side characters names!
IT'S HAPPENING! SHE'S TELLING HIM ABOUT THE TIME REVERSAL!
I skimmed through all the chapters to the end reading tidbits here and there. It's a happy ending for everyone, but the "Queen" Andre who was the murderer and the fan girls father.
I liked many elements of the story like the ML having had the time reversal, all the couples building up and getting together, the afterward for the most part, how the main couples romance built up, hell it was all well written. I have no idea if the ML ever told the FL about the time reversal.
However I did not like the fan club stuff and that's what made me start skimming through the story. I find the fan club trope to be very annoying after over a decade of reading Asian comics it gets old fast.
It also didn't feel quite right to me for the FL and ML to return to knighthood and leave their kids and territory behind, wth? Atleast have the ML stay in the territory or I don't know, take your children with you to the capital? I understand wanting to support womens dreams and all that, but I'm sorry to say the truth is that sometimes you have to change your dreams for your children. Honestly, it's just life for your dreams and duties to change and sometimes change is good. My mothers focus became my brother and I, who she raised with care and love (we were never in danger thanks to her). I hate this modern day "feminism" that says "follow your dreams and abandon your children that you brought into the world". Sure they have their grandma, but it still isn't right.
A side from that, I recommend this story if you like some drama, romance, a good afterward aside from the main couples, action and the evil guys getting their dues!
People saying the ML is a cheater have never heard of an arranged marriage before. Their relationship never went past the paper agreement. He wasn't in love with her.
Delusional people.
I can't wait to see people read the story when it's completed and go, "Wow that was really good!" It's happened to me before, sometimes stories need to be fully readable to be appreciated properly. (Almost like buying a completed book!)
It's not over yet though, so I may hate it later.
Of course it's forbidden! Just like me eating chocolate.