the way the aloha talks is just straight up out of a wattpad series... i knew the way he speaks is familiar, and this is definitely it, like when a 13 year old wrote a smut about a gangster and this is the result...
still love the story tho
the way the gangster "talks" sounds like a description of a child. you know, like stereotypical gangster. Its not bad but its also not good, but its so funny lmao. the artstyle was so good, i just can't take the words that come out of their mouth lmaoaoaoao its so unserious. but all in all, its good, the alpha is nice and is taking care of the omege really well, but the writer of the story prolly needs a better editor because the dialogue ain't it lmaoaoaooao
I WAS MAKING A LOT OF SPECULATIONS AND WHAT WOULD BE TANAKA/NAKATA'S REAL PERSONA BUT ALL OOF NY GUESS WERE WRONG LMAO.
anyways... damn that extra, those two bottoms have a really wild imagination to be dreaming about foursome, in class. lmaoo
i was only right about the fact that tanaka got to be in the same school/circle with kou because of how he brought up the chinese food.
whoever wrote this story and the art..., i'm gonna give you thousands of kiss.
THAT MAURER IS GONNA FUCK TAY'S LIFE LMAOAOAOAO I'M SO GONNA PREPARE MYSELF. ITS EITHER ILAY RIPS AND KILLS TAY OR HE JUST REALLY WANT HIM BESIDE HIM. i'm so ready to see whichever outcome and i'm sad that there's nothing in between this choice lmaoaoaoao
this is here? kinda feel bad for the artist since they're still a student who sells their uncensored art on patreon for only 1 dollar... go follow their official acc and maybe spare them a dollar ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~ (they're pretty active on facebook) (acc name: The eyes BL)
of praying for jaekyung's downfall. anyone got fanart of jaekyung getting railed by this boxer
Hahahaha
CRAZYY
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
PLEASE SEND ME IF SOMEONE HAS IT ( ◜‿◝ )♡
go lookup hal_draws on twitter! they have a really good one!
eyy thanks bro, my reaction to that fanart is just "this is jinx if its actually good" LMAOOO
bro you're so right though lmaoooo
Thank youuu ( ◜‿◝ )♡
no problem!! (*^‿^*)