wait this is actually so fire give me 100 more chapters please I can't wait...
some scenes were hard to understand, either the transition between scenes were shit or the language itself was low-key ass due to translation, not as bad as the non-con every single chapter which is portrayed in a romantic way instead of addressing the Elephant in the room and really commit with the MC leaving because the ML is toxic and forces himself on MC multiple times, forcefully marks him, forcefully wants to change his gender, and getting him an unwanted pregnancy that MC only didn't abort because he likes children and would never kill them... you might brush over it too because the manhwa wants you to think it's so romantic but if you really write it out as it is you realize how toxic rape fetish it is
Ending is so abysmally bad and rushed it legitimately pushes the score from 5 to like 2 at best. Idk what happened there but I would've rather had an indefinite hiatus than whatever shit author put in the last chapter
sorry but the first smut we get being the side couple who most people seemingly don't care for is low-key disrespectful like put this energy into the main couple please and thank you
I see a lot of comments about it but I'll join too, the plot was really poorly written, the story overall wouldn't even be bad but it's the execution that throws this whole thing off, MC is very one dimensional and whatever happens to him I don't see him dwelling on it for example after the Esper assault near the middle of the reading. He just doesn't feel like his own person.
And a lot of the plot was brushed over like that, as if they wanted to speedrun the story but of course the sex is multiple chapters long God forbid we put that work into the story instead.
And I also don't know what the beginning of this story was about like the first scene I didn't find connection with that and the rest of the story, I wouldn't say it's a deal breaker because overall it's a light read, but pretty poor on the writing department
this is genuinely one of the best guideverse I've ever read and I fear nothing will top this for a while, I do wish surprisingly that they let some of the plot drag on a bit more because it felt fast paced, some parts, the plot twist was amazingly paced though in my opinion, but I haven't read the novel so I don't know how accurate it is
I genuinely love this so much, maybe because it's adapted from a novel but the plot and chemistry is so good and they're very sweet so far, manhwa like this really raises your standards
of course his parents are abusive and the first act of kindness he ever felt is the MC And the fact I was about to fold too...he still need to be more puppy
glad to read that everyone else seems to find the plot hard to follow whenever It updates I have to read one or two chapters before just to understand what is supposed to be happening, I would advise to let it marinate and only read it once a good chunk is already out because it's impossible to get invested in the story like this with the way it's being presented
Jeaha gotta go, like genuinely no prison let's just kill him...