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P.S. A story isn't good just because it has less problematic stuff. If the problematic stuff is handled well (i.e. a plot that acknowledges consequences logically or sticking true to the premise which is you know kinky smut) even if there's a fuck ton off 'em the story still ends up being good.

Even if there's only one problematic thing in a story, if it's not handled well (i.e. Bad characterization, repetitive issues, no thoughts of fixing current issues, not acknowledging consequences in the story or not sticking with the premise of the story) it's ends up being a bad story to read.

Of course, taste in stories are different but to put down other stories just because it's more problematic is ignoring what makes a story a story, and that's being fun to read.

Personally, I think the first notice of the uploader is really what incurred so many mad readers. They were promised that it was a good story but it ends up just being a story about an alpha who can't make up his mind, a beta who is kept in the dark that his dad and boyfriend are fucking each other, and an omega who has the personality of a smooth rock.

Being honest from the get-go about the stories premise even it ends up spoiling readers gets rid of unnecessary disappointment especially when the Summary doesn't do it's job properly.

===Personal Thoughts begins here===

I can see why this would be fun to read but it is not a good story. Like, what's the point of this story? You can't mess with fate? Alphas and Omegas are meant to be and nothing else?

I'm totally fine with the fated narrative but usually it's fate pairing up two people who are not in established relationships or in bad arranged relationships. This just seems like fate being an asshole and ripping two loving people away from each other to ship one of them with the opposite sex/gender.

The beta uke seems to be decent and there really isn't any fault on his character that would give a valid reason as to have his boyfriend cheat with his father of all people.

Like I said, it's fun to read but it is not a good story. This feels more like a story made from one of those lines a bg character says to another character like, "My beta friend was broken up by his boyfriend because he found his fated omega."

If I'm wrong and beta uke is actually an asshole, like an actual asshole not just reacting to the cheating then feel free to prove me wrong (￣∇￣").

Funnily enough, I felt more strongly annoyed by the story after being told by the uploader that it was a "good story". I didn't really take the story seriously since it's probably a kink story. I guess it's a good story with that topic in mind but it really tries so hard to make it seem like the plot has logic and that the characters actions make sense.

Also, I might be a bit biased since people think they're hot and keep reading, and I don't. I really like their chibis though, they're cute.
(=・ω・=)

Holy Shit!! Yandere Hwan!!! That face he made was so cool (≧∀≦) The stories getting heated and even more interesting!

Yo, this is literally just Daddy Kink but now its Mommy. (=・ω・=) I like it

The pure, unadulterated passion of the characters is so infectious! I liked that they were no unnecessary romance and if romance was involved it moved the characters plot and the plot of the story that concluded into the ending. There were absolutely no useless plot points and everyone was concluded in a satisfying way.

Everyone is extremely three dimensional in their own way and their thoughts are well thought out and understandable in a realistic setting as well as their realization that some of them were in the wrong.

The only character I genuinely didn't like was Gina, the lilac haired girl in the beginning of the story, I understood her thoughts and reasoning  for doing what she did but she was all in the wrong!

Stalking, Defamation, and other things that she did hurt who she 'loved' more than she ever sacrificed, she expected love to be given by her by someone who didn't give ANY indication that he was remotely interested in her other than being his muse. She was too  wrapped up in her own delusional fantasy that when a clear rejection was given to her when she was at her peak with her assumptions. She got upset for something that she was the only one to have thought by herself.

She also kept trying to change Chase and kept insisting that Chase couldn't do anything if she wasn't his muse, which I don't know, seems pretty narcissistic to me? She clearly disregards Chase for who he is and only wants him to act like how she wants him to act. She says she loves Chase but if you loved someone wouldn't you wanted them to be happy and not suffering by your side?

As an aromantic, I would be completely terrified if someone that thought that we would even have a chance to be together despite clearly stating time and time again that I have no interest in anyone so I may be a bit biased on Gina and have maybe demonized her a bit on my tangent.

Chase's only flaw in his relationship with Gina was that he was too cold and harsh and I also didn't like how he said it but at the time he was only coming into terms that IF he ever liked someone it would be like Gina not that he completely liked Gina at the time.

I respect Chase's honesty but his personality is really a bit too much for someone who doesn't really know and acknowledge him for who he is, like Gina.

When I saw the cover I immediately knew that it was the artist behind The Library

The princess was born a boy and was raised as a princess because his father wanted to have a daughter.

The king couldn't make his other brothers do it so he was the one raised as a girl since he didn't really care or oppose to it.

Probably genderfluid, Idk not really said explicitly.

Also, if you're upset about a fetish being applied in a book all about sex and fetishes, you're either really intolerant or for some reason you just read the whole book without realizing what the contents were, which...doesn't really make sense? Why are you here then?

I mean, this has psychological as a genre obviously it's gonna have disturbing stuff.
Anyway, that was pretty good read. (=・ω・=)

I know it's kind of confusing, especially the last part but a couple panels before that the boy says "Are you my dad now?" which implies that they aren't in a family relationship even an adopted one.

The man is most likely is a rental companion(?)

Btw, has anyone noticed that most expressions are a toothy grin? Even when their suppposed to be talking they still have that shit eating grin on their face. That's one of the reasons why I stopped reading this

Idk she just seems to be using Noh for her own personal gains also she just hasn't done anything worthy of praise (especially since she baited me thinking that there was finally a pretty boy in this story but nope shes a girl (╬￣皿￣)凸) If Noh has to remarry, I actually prefer the nanny if she doesn't have a husband I dont remember if she has one. Since, the kids would finally have a complete family with a sibling and people they already know and grew up with and their relationship is presented in a way that would show a natural progression of their relationship and not just "HEY GUYS!!! PRETTY GIRL LIKES NOH AND WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!! THERES GONNA BE ROMANCE HAPPENING CAUSE THERES A PRETTY GIRL THAT LIKES NOH!!"