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i rly like it, but it's all over the place a bit, we have flashbacks to things that have yet to happen, inconsistencies and unexplained things getting thrown out there waiting for context that never comes. I don't know if some of it is translation but it's hard to follow sometimes.
i also sus mtl even in the officials...
idk man going back to this after newer manga, just the trope of the cool cucumber seme who barely ever expresses any emotion, always knows what to do, super mature, just feels shallow now, like there are mls like this even now but have more depth somehow... idk reading this feels timed haha