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Umi no hikari August 31, 2026 4:43 am

At last they are fixing the misunderstanding. Now the author doesn't need to use fainting as their main narrative tool

    Park Dojin is My Alpha September 1, 2026 6:01 pm

    Maybe, just maybe, fainting is a crucial part of the story. He is not well, and fainting so much is actually a very worrying issue.
    I don't think the fainting is overused because the plot literally says his body is giving up on him. Fainting is part of the plot, he is literally unwell.

    Umi no hikari September 2, 2026 2:44 pm
    Maybe, just maybe, fainting is a crucial part of the story. He is not well, and fainting so much is actually a very worrying issue. I don't think the fainting is overused because the plot literally says his bod... Park Dojin is My Alpha

    The issue is that the fainting has left the MC with no character agency. You can have anything as a crucial part of the story, but the readers should still feel like the characters' decisions have an impact of the plot. I have read many stories where the MC is extremely ill, but there is more plot going on that him fainting. Remember, a single part or element of the plot shouldn't consume the entire plot.

Umi no hikari August 28, 2026 2:33 am

The author really made Lee Geon incredibly handsome. At the end of chapter 187, we are all like Scorpio's Saint simping for him hahahaha

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