beta
I love this and think both couples are so cute, and the art is so pretty and different and it"s really refreshing to have burly character BUT I SERIOUSLY CRINGE FROM THE MC PINK LIPS idk why it just feels so out if place everytime I'm like whyyyyy
I thought it was super promising premise and pretty art, but the plot is just so "excuse to fuck". The pacing is terrible without much development, and tbh the sex scenes are kind of weird, the author definitely draws other scenes better. (Like why does his taint look like a pussy, and why is it doing that weird melting flesh to show action thing)
Man I was real excited by the first two chapters, but like they fuck immediately and then skip the first two weeks of them even getting to know each other?
It really comes across like Ai generated art too
Same I feel like the story skipped so many moments that could’ve helped build the characters more. I wanted to feel connected to them first before the plot sped up that much.