After a quick re reading of the last few chapters(without the side stories) I can say for certain that the twins weren't necessary for the plot. Having Lena not even be part of the side stories but just be focused on the twins is a low blow when we got to meet her and see her slowly grow.
Also it removed the stakes. Having Chloe infertile it would've been a good plot line to make everything have more weight, but instead she got pregnant with twins and it removed all the pain she suffered before even meeting the Duke. Like this her position was no longer about her bloodline(because she wasn't recognised that easily as legitimate royal despite being the only one left with the bloodline) but it was more about "oh, she had his kids, so it's ok". Instead of having a matriarch/empress, she basically solidified her position because of the kids and not because of her knowledge, her will to see everyone equal and so on... Not saying that being a mother removes agency, but it's just another "so by miracle they had kids" plot which is a little bit cliché.
Then, Lena being sent away. It's a shame that we saw this baby barely for a few panels being all grown and taking after her mother, just for her to be studying away and never be seen again. If instead of the twins, they had Lena became the protagonist for the side stories, I think it would've worked so well. Because at that point, I believe, it would've been about having the challenged of Lena to be recognised as the next in line because she isn't a biological daughter of neither Chloe and the Duke. It would've been more interesting that the engagement of six years old kids, especially because they could've aged Lena to be like of age.
Author is Korean. Culture had a hand in the story flow.
Nah, this is criminally short
So we meet again..
Omg I've been reading yalls comments thinking you guys were the same people
HAHAA ANOTHER VICTIM
I really wanted to read this and I thought it was cute at first... Then the blonde guy started talking(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ Bro, just for once I want some friends to lovers without a second male lead.
Why are people calling this AI? It is because of the name of her ex bf? I don't see the usual sights of AI and I don't know what people expected when we're talking about the author of "Landlord's little girl". The artstyle is pretty similar to it's predecessor, just less rendered. The story I don't have high expectations because it's smut but it's tame compared to the other one(even if it's too early to say). To be honest, I don't know what people expected when seeing the title.
the art looks really ai generated, also that ine girls design isnt consistant
I thought i was overthinking it but yes! As an artist myself, I can definitely see some of the panels are AI
Fr the art looks like their past works
I re read it and I can't find the usual signs of AI. Like I tried to find inconsistency, but even the nail art of the girls are consistent. The lines look clean, unlike the messy melted art AI usually has(and I did read a manhwa who's official translation uses AI and messed the art). Can someone indicate where the signs are outside that name (which I have to keep in mind that it's a Korean translated to English and with all the AI slop of course someone outside the West might think it's a common name without thinking much. Even just a panel is enough, but I even zoomed in on bg characters and couldn't find signs of inconsistency or things melting together, I feel like I'm the one going crazy here （/TДT)/
Exactly!! Maybe it’s the art style that makes people think it’s ai everything has been consistent and it sucks seeing how people can’t tell what’s ai or not
honestly there are quite a few suspicious panels but most of it seems hand drawn. not really sure how to feel about it
Can you please indicate them??
Wait a moment... So if K (I'll butcher his full name) mistaken Little A for his ex girlfriend... Did he get pegged?
Ong
I guess so.. I feel like even by being a nurse he likes having his backdoor knocked on
I follow Spoon-nim on Instagram... And I feel like this episode is censored is some way. Like Claude felt more feral, Diana showed more skin in one particular panel. God please tell me I'm right. This episode feels so short that it should be illegal.
YES, I'M RIGHT! SPOON-NIM, RELEASE THE FILES!!
(I literally confronted the panels from from insta)
wait you're right i need the nin censored one
She put in the caption that the original drawings were sexier but she edited it to fit the 'all-ages' category the story is under. So yeah, this is kinda censored. Hopefully Spoon will release the original version in the future.
NOOOO, FREE THE FILESSSSS(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Whats her account?
Pls tell her account id
Spoon_1122
I swear to got everyone just keep getting power ups after power ups and no one ever gets to rest the last few chapters. I feel like they're dragging the plot since we're near the end and that death wasn't necessary at all