i hate the fact that the plot completely drifted away from the gaming scene and went towards the typical romance cliche route. author was making up bs as the story goes. lin lang’s character is so unlikeable that the half ass “redemption” still didn’t change my opinion of him. also don’t like zhixing cuz as a ml he provided nothing to the plot. si qi’s back must be completely fractured from carrying the story and doing everything for the main couple. i only kept on reading the manhua for the side couple (si qi and heyi) and their chemistry was 10x better. what a wasted potential for both the gaming concept and art.
the plot was confusing me with so many subplots but ch 174(?) explained everything. i dislike every parts of when the main characters are children cuz idk why the author gotta be not normal about it (ex mc holding back urges to “bully” child ml?? ml turned into a child and adult mc thinks it’s just a random kid yet is touchy and sleeps in the same bed?!). i was super invested in the first half of the story but quickly lost interest when things got complicated and went into a direction that i didn’t like.
bc mc has fetish which is bullying the person he likes. what's better than bullying the child version of his crush?
you normally wouldn't expect some fetish story to be so generally liked. but the art go so hard later and the plot is well planned. the fetish part is also not the main plot, but tbh I'm still expect more people to talk about the flaws of this story. there are plenty of critiques in the comments tho, not as much as people who like it.
aaaand tbf the positive things about this story still above many BL webtoon so that's probably why. we just don't have that many good option
idrc about the mc’s fetish, it’s just that every time the main characters are portrayed as kids i am expecting the cringe, since the first story gave me the icks. i don’t mind the plot, but since the explanation is given so late and multiple scenes to remember, it’s hard to put the whole story together in a linear timeline (for someone who wants to just casual read this).











omg i love that they both have realistic body types esp dajeong cuz he doesn’t look absolutely shredded like he has 4% body fat and eats 500g of protein everyday like the typical top. i lowkey wish the story addressed more of haneul’s hobby of baking like maybe him changing his career to be a baker.