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Ham fisted "romance ". Mary Sue character. Action with no real sense of danger and stakes.
Emotional beats (aside from the romance)was well done.
A true mess. Young Teens will probably like it.
Preach
Now that it's back. Don't go all around the internet talking about this site. Especially on Twitter. Stay quiet kids.
Everyone saying the ending was rushed. Hard disagree. This very much a vibes and atmosphere type comic. Staying too long would have ruined it. Good read.