Ham fisted "romance ". Mary Sue character. Action with no real sense of danger and stakes. Emotional beats (aside from the romance)was well done. A true mess. Young Teens will probably like it.
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I'm caught up. This has been so much better than I thought it would be.
Now that it's back. Don't go all around the internet talking about this site. Especially on Twitter. Stay quiet kids.
Ham fisted "romance ". Mary Sue character. Action with no real sense of danger and stakes.
Emotional beats (aside from the romance)was well done.
A true mess. Young Teens will probably like it.
Preach