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this is one of the few BL webtoons that actually NEEDS longer s*x scenes. where are the side stories with all smut, all fluff, no plot? I'm not asking for much, 3 side story chapters would be good...
I love the short read since there's less chances for the author to drag out the conflict arc, but damn, they really rushed the physical intimacy development between Inha and Sun-woong. it felt like their inner dialogues took precedence (which is totally NOT a bad thing!) while they were going to pound town, and the f*cking was more of a background noise.
I wish it was more balanced cuz genuine love can also be expressed through good s*x (asexuality aside), especially for a webtoon that aims to portray consensual masochism as a normal sexual preference that no one should be ashamed of.
this might as well have been R15 if they really wanted to focus on the thought processes, and just added more hanging out and dating scenes where Inha and Sun-woong open up and get comfortable with each other.
still loved this though!
why can't Eunseok just talk and explain his thoughts to Cheolmin? yes, Eunseok's feelings are valid, but Cheolmin is not a mind-reader for fuck's sake. every relationship you have in life—friends, co-workers, romantic partners, even your own family—exist because of communication!
Eunseok wants Cheolmin to open up when he won't do the same thing himself. my god!!!$#@&#
one thing realistic about this webtoon is how two ADULT MEN refuse to communicate properly, even when they're about to lose their loved one.
this webtoon better not drag the shit out this. I'd rather they fought over something else, like differences in career goals, work-life balance, who should win in Drag Race, literally ANYTHING else!