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PERIOD AS YOU SHOULD QUEEN!
ON a side not tho, they didnt do her no justice with her outfits all of her clothes that she wears to special events are hideous! They rinds me of my grandmother's couch, drapes, and rug LMFAOOOO.
The one she wore to the birthday thing was so bad oml amd the casual clothes that had a blue blazer with yellow heels oml fuck is that style?
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I literally cant fucking stand this editor and their dumbass side comments. Calling the choreography cringy, the king ugly when he isnt, and saying their isnt nothing special about the MC worth just because of a play. Get your fucking act together dude instead of being fucking toxic about a webtoon you translate.
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Edit: I'm dropping this because those small comments are still rude as fuck..literally just kept basing on the performance the MC worked on for no fucking reason. I'd advise you not to read if you dont want to see spiteful comments like that. Personally it ruined the story for me around chpt.12 and after that I barely skimmed it.
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This story genuinely fucking sucks. First off, did they think making the MC overly sick for no fucking reason at random was cute? It makes it worse. Then wtf was that kiss about? Random amd I'd prefer her to fucking stay sane and not stupid to act like shes drunk and has to kiss people. That's the biggest problem that irks me hella bad. I thought we had a strong female lead who was a FUCKING KNIGHT
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Look if you don't like it then don't read it, while I'm not happy with actions of our fl you can't put your expectations on her from the other FL leads you have read from. Accept she different and you if can't do that just leave. As the other reply you got, shows that there will be progress. This is necessary for the story to develop. The author wrote like this for a reason.
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I get his point. She was supposed to be a great knight (one of the best) and to see her be reduced to this state (although understandable with everything she's gone through and lost), it is frustrating, since her current behavior is not of someone who reflects who she was in her past life. She may not have the same physical capabilities, but we should at least expect some level of intelligence and common sense.
So far, all of her actions amount to a noble pampered girl who's never seen a day of battle or hardship in her life (and we know that is not true). But again dying and being bought back in someone else's body in the empire that destroyed your home would break anyone and I guess that is more realistic.
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Although their critique could've been worded better (it is still their honest opinion), you can't tell every person who doesn't love/cast praise over a story to "if you don't like then don't read or why don't you write something instead if you're such an expert".
If the art/plot/character or progression is bad or lacking, then it should be called out. You and I may not like it or agree with it, but it doesn't make it any less true.
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It’s not a critique, it’s a hate comment. While it’s true that people are entitled to their opinion, claiming it as a criticism when it’s being done in place where the author cant see it isn’t a criticism that came out of a goodwill, it’s just a complaint, an entitled hate comment. It wont help anyone and wont make the story better. Also you can see that in the caption they literally trash talking this manhwa and shush everyone away from reading because they dont like how the author wrote the characters.
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Girl... She is mentally unstable... Can't you see?? She is acting rashly cause she is not on her best condition to think rationally... That is why her actions do not make sense at all!!
You can also attribute her with modern mental unstable people.. They act brash and you can't get them..
You are just way too used with FLs that came from modern world and knew the plot well..
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She is in fact NOT mentally unstable. She just has trauma that can be triggered by Khalid. Mentally unstable period would make this book about a girl that insane. She has proven herself in more ways than 1 to have a strong mentality making her a strong female lead. She just fucking faints too much and that's the authors mistake for abusing colds and fevers. Her being trigger by Khalid and acting like she did when she saw him is something I'm most DEF not talking about. If you dont understand my fucking comment then ask what do I mean. Its simple rather jumping to conclusions on to get heated on
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Fuck I have to write my own story for? You think spamming fevers and colds everywhere is cute? Why dont I fucking write about a girl that gets sick often. That's it. Just a book about a girl getting spammed by fucking almost uncommon but common fevers and colds randomly. Hell I'd make her happy as fuck one day then suddenly hit her with a fever in the middle of riding a bike
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Listen, how the fuck am I supposed to know I dont like it if I dont read it. Cant fucking change the past. Did I say she was supposed to be like all the other fl??? No, cant you just fucking accept the fact that spamming colds and fevers everywhere isnt cute and that Aurhors make mistakes??? They arent perfect tf. If there's something wrong then someone's gonna say something about it even if the original author doesnt see it. And that's exactly what my comment is.
Cliffhangers are more illegal than reading this on this website illegally. I suggest you put another chapter for ofcourse....legal purposes to lessen your case