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idk it just gave nothing I think the way their relationship was shown made it feel dry and like they had no bond. The story fast forward through it so I couldn't really feel anything for them like it's hard to explain but I wish they made Akane a bit more irrational showing he was actually afraid of losing toui instead of him just distancing himself which contradicts everything i think it just lacked emotion everyone was way too calm for me i wanted more of Akane pov to feel his character more it was too focused on how toui sees and feels about Akane scars if im being truly honest i wish the story revolved around akane instead showing us the struggle with having his mindset, the self-harming and trying to love someone i think that's what would've hit home having struggling with the same thing cause yeah it's hard loving someone who hurts themselves but i think it's even harder to live with the thought of constantly wanting to hurt yourself

I'm icked out too much of that and i get they know his gay but damn raping being the constant punishment is so icky once I see a bunch of SA or rape i can't i'm checked out and it's no longer a good story

i love when they're both equally crazy and freaked out just both toxic as hell threating each other and possessive i may need more

wtf is happening this might be the best-off track side story the sexual tension is beyond wild and good I'm drooling

this was sooo good i need more just a few more plzzzzzzzzzz

they just found an equal grounding at least bring in that thing a little later another problem this quickly it better be to help their bond grow and not break or I'm finna get violent

him dropping the kids off at the police station and dipping was the stupidest idea ever like knowing how he lived it makes no sense he thought the police would actually do their job and help that just seemed outta character and he didn't even check to see if the kids were okay after it just seems performative with how he handled it

bros finally letting his inner freak out i want him to live freely i feel so bad for him i just want the ml to be someone he can lean on and find comfort in their bonding in way and its cute I'm scared though from my 8 years of experience they going to have an angst arc very soon and the mc don't need it his "I'm so tired of all of this" really hit me hard he really dosen't need to be broken any futher

the way the mc was obsessed was interesting so i thought there was gpnna be more to him, but he was boring

i really need to know how the mc forgot the ML when it should have probably been a big plot point in his high school years like i thought their connection was going to be a simple passing short thing, but you created a deep bond with someone and don't remember ?????