The MC is too childish for my taste, not to mention their relationship progressed far too fast. I fear if I blinked again, they'd marry... Not to mention both the MC and ML had the barest amount of characterization.
On a different note, this is my first time seeing someone actually identify as polyamorous. Unfortunately, the ML doesn't communicate this before hooking up with the MC. Big no-no. He just casually drops it after they start messing around. The matter also gets dropped just as quickly as it arrived.
Overall, it feels like the author clearly made the manga with the intention of fulfilling certain fetishes
I really really don't like the early chapters, does the ML ever...get better??? Any redemption arc gang ?
Honestly, I came back and forgot everything, but I'd say Kinda, especially in the side story.
No he doesn't
What on earth would you need a vibrating bed for-
(No one answer that actually)
I shall traumatise u my friend
It’s so the top can keep laying down while the bottom is on his thing while the bed do the fwops sosh fabs :3
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Ngl if there was mpreg in this, I would've dropped this faster than a hot potato. I can't stand ass babies, I'm sorry I'm glad it doesn't go down the mpreg route...
I mean c'mon, how much of the story would be really be affected if the age gap was smaller??? If they wanted to write about the childhood years, make Levi the same age. Or vice versa.
I can't fathom the purpose of the MASSIVE age gap other than for nefarious reasons. It would literally make the plot better too if they were closer in age (ie both teens). The horrible treatment of the prince would be because of a decade of assassinations rather than one year(in current chapters, he literally looks the same age he was when his mother died help. That means all that happened in like a year -).
People find this tolerable because of the story but tbh, I find it a great shame that such skill is wasted on an author obsessed with making their characters incredibly underaged and shoving them in romantic scenarios. I'm not going to hassle with the people who enjoy this as it obviously has a very good plot/concept so understandable, have a good day but my god. I hope you see why this has been a legitimate disappointment for me.
Real, like age gap is okay if there is no bad stuff, mushy happening when they are underage. But it would definitely be much better if the age gap was smaller. Like magician could be 14 and prince 11, so both of them would still be dumb kids, and plot would make so much more sense
I wonder if the novel is just as rushed or it's just the manhua. What happened to the revolt?? Karyan??? There could've been at least two more arcs lol
AGREED
That stain on the dogs forehead in the original novel is cuz the ML dropped food on him lmao I was surprised to see it here
The novel is completely translated btw
OH!! IMMA GO FIND IT THANK YOU
This manga is interestingly written in the style the MC would've written lmao slow paced, seemingly unrequited love, set in modern day (I assume since the MC bases it off his real life, it's all modern day)
it's kind of cool? Idk if that's on purpose tho
I've never seen the ML smile, low-key was a bit scary