The MC is too childish for my taste, not to mention their relationship progressed far too fast. I fear if I blinked again, they'd marry... Not to mention both the MC and ML had the barest amount of characterization.
On a different note, this is my first time seeing someone actually identify as polyamorous. Unfortunately, the ML doesn't communicate this before hooking up with the MC. Big no-no. He just casually drops it after they start messing around. The matter also gets dropped just as quickly as it arrived.
Overall, it feels like the author clearly made the manga with the intention of fulfilling certain fetishes
I really really don't like the early chapters, does the ML ever...get better??? Any redemption arc gang ?
Ngl if there was mpreg in this, I would've dropped this faster than a hot potato. I can't stand ass babies, I'm sorry I'm glad it doesn't go down the mpreg route...
I wonder if the novel is just as rushed or it's just the manhua. What happened to the revolt?? Karyan??? There could've been at least two more arcs lol
That stain on the dogs forehead in the original novel is cuz the ML dropped food on him lmao I was surprised to see it here
The novel is completely translated btw
This manga is interestingly written in the style the MC would've written lmao slow paced, seemingly unrequited love, set in modern day (I assume since the MC bases it off his real life, it's all modern day)
it's kind of cool? Idk if that's on purpose tho