I just noticed that nobody has commented on this! I think a story and translation is really good! Good job!!(⌒▽⌒)
SHIT HES A LITERAL VICTIM!!!bro almost got raped, killed multiple times, OH DONT FORGET the fact that he felt bad for rejecting her when she was trying to rape him, like poor dude, cannot get a break.
I just noticed that nobody has commented on this! I think a story and translation is really good! Good job!!(⌒▽⌒)