As a guy, my honest opinion is that that dick looks really small lol. It looks to be intentionally small on the authors side (but I really hope not cause I hate when authors give the bottom a small dick and the top a whale dick.)
As for the redrawerer, you did good with with what you had to work with.










"I took in somone as lowly as ML"
Uhhh, you're not helping your case here bud.