These chapters are masterpieces.
However, chapter 14 and above is so stupid that even a high school student can write a plot better.
Its so stupid that ML says he still "shaken up" by his ex. It is psychologically impossible to happen. The author need to remove that part. It's such a stupid bad writing.
I don't understand why the author forgot about to expound what happened when they broke up and its resolution. The bot broke up with the top because the top seems getting cold to the bot. That's what the first story is. However, there was no chapter where they talked about it. The next chapters did not continued this story and just blindly went for another direction. OR MAYBE IM MISUNDERSTANDING? PLS EXPLAIN
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like for real im still finding the reason why they broke up and the ml sudden change of action like that’s it? what about their break up in the first chapters like how, when, where, what happen. i understand the ml is like that ignoring the mc because he gets a boner everytime he see him. im still confuse
Thank you for reply! I thought Im the only one who thinks like this. I keep finding other comments that states this but none It really bothers me so I need someone to share the burden with.
So it's just telling the reason that he gets boner that's why he acted cold?
Lol
I think it's because the ml is always trying to hold back that the conclusion he came up with is to back off and see the mc less so he'll be less horny because he's scared he'd hurt the mc
They did explain! Haru has a high sex drive and Everytime Jiseo touched him he got horny. He was holding back bc Jiseo passed out once bc the sex was too much. Hence why Haru wanted separate rooms and limited touching.
When they broke up, Haru didn’t beg Jiseo or get upset in front of him bc Jiseo said (while watching a movie) that a couple should breakup amicably so they could continue on as friends. Haru didn’t put up a fuss bc he thought that would ruin his chances of being with Jiseo.
Haru didn’t forget the anniversary, he remembered and got surprised that Jiseo wanted to celebrate it bc Jiseo said that he wanted to take a break with the celebrations for a year.
Haru bottles things up bc he’s insecure and Jiseo has a terrible memory - which caused a lot of misunderstandings.
But, yeah, they already went over this in the story. If you reread it you’ll see them talk abt it.
Exactly, you explained it well
Read my comment again:
"The bot broke up with the top because the top seems getting cold to the bot. That's what the first story is. However, there was no chapter where they talked about it."
It makes no sense for the reason that the top get cold because "he has insane high dex drive". Worth to mention, they already knew each other.
It bothers me that out of nowhere, the top gets cold to bot and HE did not explain it.
The thing he mentioned where he has sex drive DOES NOT resolve the idea that he gets cold. He said that in a DIFFERENT CONTEXT.
Yess
Like just because of high sex drive
He is giving cold shoulder to bot （/TДT)/
It's ridiculous
Chapters 70 to 80 were boring
No reread value
It did not live up to tell a story
I specially loved it. It is terrible when all the good "boring" parts are left for maybe 1 or 2 chapters at the end because it is not interesting enough to keep someone's attention span
I was talking about the way the story is being told. The reason why that evil guy gets evil is shallow. IT could've been improved. However, up to Chapter 84?, it becomes PEAK again.
Lol that's was my problem. People were complaining that come chapter 100 and still didn't find anything interesting or good, just "fillers". Made me wonder if we are reading the same thing tbh
But yeah they are some part around 70-80 that don't really contribute much
I just want to ask, is there a missing page? I got confused, as suddenly, the theme of latter pages is "I'll make him confess to me" but there was no smooth transition to that or whatsoever. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
What chapter are you talking about (づ￣ ³￣)づ
I think around 60 to 70ish, maybe I need to read it again, they just saying the quote "I'll make him confess to me" out of nowhere but there was no scene leading up to the quote. Maybe I just need to read it again (〜￣△￣)〜
Maybe you mean 75. If you do, I checked and the pgs seem to be in the correct order (づ￣ ³￣)づ
“I have to find a way to turn him down gently. But I suppose before that… I have to make him confess to me first.”
Thank You! Now I understand. I was surprised as the pages around 80 centralized on the "quote" and I was like "but why???". I guess is for the bot to not be seen as assuming.
Why I'm here?
Because it's my monthly reading of depressing BL!（/TДT)/