Haiku are only three lines long, with five syllabels in lines one and three and seven in line two, your poem is considered free verse instead, just thought you should know ... no offense intended.
err.. is it just me or did anyone else have problems understanding what they were saying? its not so much grammatical, it was more like the words were all over the place :/
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Is this related to the Zutto Mae kara Suki deshita.: Kokuhaku Jikkou Iinkai movie?
I Love All The Stories~It's So Sweet!And Some Of The Females Are Really Strong!!I Love The Sentence "Don't Joke With Me,I Have Thorns"(づ￣ ³￣)づ
whalefish at dawn
spreading its wings
the soup is colder than yesterday
entangled chopsticks
k, enjoy the haiku
baibai
Haiku are only three lines long, with five syllabels in lines one and three and seven in line two, your poem is considered free verse instead, just thought you should know ... no offense intended.
err.. is it just me or did anyone else have problems understanding what they were saying? its not so much grammatical, it was more like the words were all over the place :/
meh~ I still loved all of them anyway ^.^
Misato is taller than me.... orz i feel really short now...
.....................................................cute......
The last two stories I think were my favorite they had strong female leads.
that's nice.
innocent- no sex:(- but good all the same
They should continue the story with Hanna!!!!
gahhhh i wanna see wat happens after her challenge~!!! gah~!!!!