lenaGRonyx's manga / #arts/literature(34)

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] |Chapter 56 - Dropped| C'est super mal écrit, j'en peux plus. The plot isn't really the problem, it's plainly poorly written and doesn't make any sense (events, characters, dialogue). Sometimes, it's rushed and other it's just "fuck the logic". Moreover written by someone who probably doesn't understand these addressed traumas, so makes it worse

|Chapter 77 - Dropped| It was fucking lame and awfully written (I have a lot of time). Plus Iri excited me at first, in like the 2 first chapters but after that his vibe disappointed me and the storyline didn't take the turn I hoped for. Kiyo is too stupid young, and everyone is lame. Cringed me as fuck

It went a little overboard no? like.. chapter 6 for first?