I will be waiting for you in 1999
|Chapter 12| Ahhhhh it looks sad!!!
Mania
["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] To be good, not there yet, still need more writting, experience, but not bad I think (comparé à d'autres mangas de l'auteur que j'ai essayé, sa manière de décrire le désir et la possessivité dans celui-ci sonne plus juste)
Bye Bye
Poorly written, so it's bad. Loved the miscarriage and all the psychological aspect of the plot (suicide, therapy for psychopath (xD)), it changes but rarely well handled (the worst was the family gathering after the miscariage, the author wanted it to not be too heavy and so use the gag "he cries easily" the whole fucking chapter, one not funny and two if you empathise at least a little with the couple who lost their baby, it was fucking horrible to read). And what the heck with this end, it's not finished.
Nights Before Night
["Mods" - "Nights Before Night" - "His Little Amber"]
His Little Amber
["Mods" - "Nights Before Night" - "His Little Amber"] |Chapter 8|
Killing Stalking