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lenaGRonyx's manga / #parenthood/childcare(44)

Dear Benjamin

Ongoing | Id,Top jung | 2019 released

|Chapter 45| I like it, it's a pretty built story, Isaac is dangerous and tough (for "once" the uke is cool/the cooler). But too bad cause the plot is "realistic", mature, deep and then, Felix come, with a childish attitude and ruin every serious business. The first impression is good, he is sexy, serious, looks dangerous and to know his business,.. he's a fucking leader, boss in arms trafficking, worlwide knowed, and still, you don't know how, doesn't act like it. Besides that, fell in love with Isaac out of nowhere (he spoke with him 2 times 3 sec and Bam), too fast, and started acting like a 10 years old in love, ugh.. and he speaks too much. While sensitive moments (critical emotional) he runs a monologue of love and possessiness ruining the climax yet I'm sure 4 words or conveys max 2 ideas within 2 sentences would have a greater impact. I am sad, I would have liked it more if the "heavy" and triller mood was held the whole story and so adjust Felix's character.

When The Yakuza Falls Inlove

Ongoing | Murimi,dupal | 2019 released

|Side 2 official translation|