lenaGRonyx's manga / #webtoon(32)

|Chapter 45| I like it, it's a pretty built story, Isaac is dangerous and tough (for "once" the uke is cool/the cooler). But too bad cause the plot is "realistic", mature, deep and then, Felix come, with a childish attitude and ruin every serious business. The first impression is good, he is sexy, serious, looks dangerous and to know his business,.. he's a fucking leader, boss in arms trafficking, worlwide knowed, and still, you don't know how, doesn't act like it. Besides that, fell in love with Isaac out of nowhere (he spoke with him 2 times 3 sec and Bam), too fast, and started acting like a 10 years old in love, ugh.. and he speaks too much. While sensitive moments (critical emotional) he runs a monologue of love and possessiness ruining the climax yet I'm sure 4 words or conveys max 2 ideas within 2 sentences would have a greater impact. I am sad, I would have liked it more if the "heavy" and triller mood was held the whole story and so adjust Felix's character.

I don't know if it's intended (well I think not) but they fell in love too fast, too hard and seems without a reason but with their nightmares and time travel, it looked like they fell hard because the time travel, because in the futur they already loved each other and so already lived their love. I liked the idea, the logic behind and the chaos it would bring.

|Side 2 official translation|

|Chapter 37| Dooshik's hair color and length change like every 3 chapter (get on my nerves and also make my laugh) and he speaks too much while sexy time, but he fucks like me, made me laugh (got curious about the author) XD --Chapter 33, the heck? First, the guy Dooshik forgot about urgence/hospital his lover maybe dying and took the time to fight with Pilwon. Then they wanna make out (why? going to hospital is still an issue), their injuries flew off (fuck you), and why? why Jooha is up to it and how Dooshik didn't saw bruises and stains of blood? Jooha just got raped and bled because off it, so how? why any of them would want it?-- --Chapter 36 was hilarious--

|Chapter 34 - Dropped| First "What does he mean it's his first time?? He's been cheated on multiple times and just got out of a 3 year relationship" and like always, didn't ship with the successful rich alpha. Poorly written and bad translate, so it's too annoying to keep up (and since the "level of writting", it doesn't make sense Hesoo didn't fall in love with Taeoh, he is his type by his looks, he is kind, attentionate, in good terms with his family, cares about his son, his son loves him, his son's teacher and neighbour so they see each other all the time, and an alpha so they should be alchemy). I was waiting to see Taeoh's past (I suppose he is son of a mafia boss), but I gave up.

Hard to follow the supernatural logic, which doesn't seem really well build and also no contant, just not necessary complicated to make it looks like something amazing. And I would have prefered if while the second pregnancy, Theo took Calion as his second capri in orther to protect Seram and theirs positions, their child and pregnancy (to make believe Calion fathered the second pregnancy and to sent away Seram and their child, to rebuild Langeres). Their reunion would have been more rewarding and heart-warming.

Ahh seke stories are super rare, I want more and a little better handed one. I don't know if there is problem with the scans or if it's just not well written, but it looked like there were pages or frames missing and not only once, so it takes you out of it.

|Chapter 113 - Dropped| --Their newborn is an alpha female in a world without second gender, THAT is interristing--

|Chapter 3 - Dropped|

|Chapter 26 - Dropped| Seem interesting because of the context of this world (extinction of omegas) but I read a little, it doesn't quite grasp enough the omegaverse feeling/logic and later I saw a chapter were the alpha abandon the omega in heat thinking it's for the best, it fucked hurt me.