Be A Dumb Bitch

I like- big boys, itty bitty boys Mississippi boys, inner city boys I like the pretty boys with the bow tie Get your nails did, let it blow dry I like a big beard, I like a clean face I don't discriminate, come and get a taste From the playboys to the gay boys Go and slay, boys, you my fave boys   reply

i like eating cale for breakfast, lunch, dinner, midnight snack, and dessert   reply

The story is fine, I just have an issue with the formatting. Why are so many `X says´, `Y exclaims´ and `Z shouts´? On this small chapter there are only three characters so there's no need to write who is the spokesperson every single time. This kind of stuff is pretty intuitive in a dialogue filled scene. Here's a handy example on how to do it ......   reply

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I hope you're okay! I hate that I live in America Here are some pics tho (=・ω・=)   reply