sometimes when it's overhyped..... anw love triangles, ugly art, boring start and bland sex and when I hate the author. I can't stand emotionless expression while having sex reply
1. Cringe dialogues
2. artstyle that doesnt suit the story
3. side character/love interest is too pick me or bitchy
4. gooner MC
5. MC overestimating themselves and failing miserably .
Like no.2 idc if your artstyle is perfect or not , slightly off or wrong proportion . But if you're writing a serious action/dark story/horror with the artstyl...... reply
LOVE TRIANGLES LOVE TRIANGLES LOVE TRIANGLES.
The one I like usually doesn't end up being picked, so whenever I get even a WHIFF of one I drop it. can we just have everyone kiss and make out please and thank you 2 reply
When the plot is lacking and there r wayyyy too many unnecessary details. Like pointless small talk that has zero relevance for the story. It adds nth and it feels sooo cringy and it just wastes time ig.
Alsooo, TOO much intimate talking. Like I don't hate it but it shouldn't be too stretched. Cuz it's getting cringier. reply
authors will do anything to create some kind of drama, well it doesn't make sense because your ancestors were prob gay and omegaphobia is just misogyny so i think homophobia should just be alpha x alpha and omega x omega 1 reply
When the top doesnt show any reaction while fucking
Not even a single blush like idk why you trying to act nonchalant you might as well fuck a fleshlight. 3 reply
