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Rewrite your least favorite story
Basically choose the story you hate the most and rewrite the story in a way you think improves the narrative. Obviously you don't have to rewrite it entirely just change up whatever you want!
Leewon ends up with me instead of that psychotic maniac
Jk I think Caesar should've been shown from the start to be a control maniac and a psychotic mf. The author should've fleshed him out and explored his childhood and the fact that he was raised a weapon from the start, the biggest flaw this story has is his inability to progress in the whole ...... 2 reply
