fun and joy. I see fear and greed more often than i see two people rolling around enjoying eachother. i want them making the other laugh or just enjoying the others warmth instead of super intense scenes or SA. 2 reply
sexual tension, it's smut but it's so boring, all I can see i fwop thwop ngh ah~ and dick going in and out, that's like basic stuff, I want more passion and not just them going through the motions of it, like I want them staring into each other's eyes and clasping their hands together as they kiss, his/her fingers moving and roaming across his/her ...... 4 reply
Love making. They'd rather give you 100 pov shots of the cock being balls deep with ass juice squirting everywhere than give just ONE pov shot of them making proper eye contact and really feeling each other emotionally. Most of these smut scenes are too purely physical. 1 reply
Personality. Why are authors afraid of individuality in smut scenes. The characters can have interesting personalities & dynamics outside of the smut, but as soon as they start banging they become stock characters. reply
There’s hardly any passion and love in these stories like I would appreciate it more if they were actually both enjoying the sex and afterwards, instead of passing out, they would cuddle or comfort each other. It’s also so hard to find anything where they have actual real romantic and sexual tension that gradually builds up they usually just go...... reply
